[Report This]Date: February 19 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
If anyone can influence this brand-new Soulreaper, it's Hilde. But, we--your loyal readers--know that there is still a wild card out there that might spoil things as likely as not.
The newly revived Freya.
Date: February 11 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
OOPS! My bad. That should've read "...re-tying it into 'The Contract.' " :-(
Author's Response:
No worries. The two stories are pretty intricately intertwined, pulling apart completely, whoa, daunting
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Aw, man! Oleg was doing so well with his reverse-psychology, too.
Seriously, though: I'm finally all caught up with this rewrite. Thanks for reposting, D. I was beginning to think you had permanently abandoned this story.
Author's Response:
I wasn't overly happy with some of the elements and felt the story was slipping, so hence the rewrite. i had most of it done awhile ago, but it's easy to get caught up in other projects. My hope is to finish this one, then knot up the contract as welll. My intentions are good, but follow through...
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Just curious: Tiny's real first name isn't "Dan," by any chance? ;-)
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yep! You're definitely getting closer to where you left off with the original version.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
"How do you handle a hungry Soulreaper? A finger man-wich!"
Author's Response:
Little cocktail wienies...?
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
A-ha! You're starting to catch up with the original chapter 6. Nice!
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can just picture the title of the next chapter. "Yes, Virginia. There Is A Shrunken Man In My Possession."
Author's Response:
Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf (them down)?
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
I spoke too soon. You're obviously re-tying it in with "The Heist." Well done and thank you!
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
You should call this rewrite "The New Adventures of Old Zara."
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looks like Oleg has it "maid."
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yep! It's a complete rewrite, alright.
But, why???
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Are you doing a rewrite of the entire second-third of the original novel?
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Holy Deja vu. Batman!
[Report This]Date: February 11 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Next time, just keep him in her panties.
I love it when a woman does that. It's even better than shoving him inside her ass.
Interesting to see this story make a return.
Will Bang your head make a return? I would love to see some action with Ms. Mackenzie.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm not done with Bang Your Head, but floundering a little bit. She's establishing who the boss is and the learning of roles can be shitty
Date: January 26 2016 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hoping to see an update but that probably won't happen.
Author's Response:
I want to tear this one apart and put it back together. I'm about halfway to where I want it, but I keep coming up with other stuff. Proably wont be for a while though... :(
[Report This]Date: July 09 2015 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
So, Hilde is a domesticated Soulreaper, huh? Interesting!
Author's Response:
Like a pet tiger
[Report This]Date: July 09 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Soulreapers. Interesting. Sounds like a mutated version of one of these women. Animalistic as well.
Soul reapers have yellow eyes, but doesn't Hilde have yellow eyes? And does that.....mean...that she....is a soulreaper too?
If yes, Hilde is one smart soulreaper in contrast to the other girl who has the brain of a child and the hormones of a teen.
Next chapter prediction: Zara finds Jack Dalton. Tried to eat him, but his power makes her throw up. She decides to keep him and then She meets Sophie who has Theo on her shoulder. Zara swallows them both. Then Dr. Featherstone and Hilde make a few calls about defeating Zara, but Zara decides to use Jack and Lori as a hostage situation. Then a whole fight erupts, Zara swallows 100+ people, and eventually Hilde uses some magic to defeat Zara. (Totally not what's gonna happen next chapter). :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 03 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm almost tempted to say something like: "They're now riding her menstrual cycle." But, that would be stooping too low, even for me.
So I won't. ;-)
Author's Response:
I actually thought about how a period might maybe her uber cranky but, right now she seems to be having fun.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
So Charlotte is living with her sister and parents. That could be interesting in the future. We met Virginia, a taller, but younger version of Charlotte. Now we need to meet the parents.(maybe not the dad, just her mom.)
Zara is a horny assassin. She toys, shrinks, and swallow people for pleasure. And Lori has a front row seat! What a show for her...possibly the best horror movie in her life! Haha.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Going to exploring the dynamic between Lori and Zara, 'but wait there's more!'