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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 9:48 AM Title: Sleepover at Sarah's

Someone should remind Isaac that even Lake Superior is shallow at the edges.*


*I was originally thinking about saying that he shouldn't sweat the small stuff. But, I changed my mind as that would, admittedly, be stooping _too_ low.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 10:54 PM Title: Sleepover at Sarah's

So I realize that some of your first chapters are space out pretty good. But they do need a bit more though.

Some of my favorite authors on this site are Jacksmith, JT07, Akbar, etc. Trying checking out they're writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll check them out

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