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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 9:26 AM Title: Sarah

Methinks Sarah might be a switch hitter...and I don't mean on a girls' softball team.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 10:42 PM Title: Sarah

Alright, you need to continue to space out you paragraph. Once that happens it will be mostly perfect.

Maybe try looking at other stories that have the spacing, or books. If you don't want to do that then just turn on double spacing.

Author's Response:

Yeah I'll just turn on double space haha, I write on my phone, so I just got into the bad habit of not adding good spacing. Thanks for the feedback!

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