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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 9:28 PM Title: Michelle's House

Ok, how small is he? I would think she would have noticed him by now. Don't you think?

Anyways nice chapter. Just need a bit more information to clear up these questions. And maybe make the chapters a bit longer then leave a jaw dropping cliffhanger at the end.

Hopefully others will leave a review. Because if I have to I will leave 10 reviews:)

Author's Response:

Posting next chapter now! This is the info chapter, where his condition is explained. He is about an inch and a half tall, and I had Michelle wearing headphones and preoccupied with other tasks to make the unaware scenes not too realistic, I just wanted to write some good unawre haha. Feedback is much appreciated, posting the next chapter now.

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