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Reviewer: mjfan45 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 6:26 PM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

Please do not stop writing this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey! I don't plan on it, I actually just recently gor through some work related and location issues, but I plan to start writing again soon!

Reviewer: mjfan45 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 5:30 AM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

I like chapter 6

Reviewer: mjfan45 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 5:29 AM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

I like chapter 5

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 9:53 AM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

Really loved the length of the last few chapters but I was hoping that there would have been more butt action in the underwear department. #iwantmorebooty lol

Author's Response:

Have you read Chapter 6? If not, that is probably exactly what you're looking for haha

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2015 5:08 PM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

I love the butt part of the story and you've just barely scratched the surface of that category. So I hope there is MORE booty to come!! Chapters being a little longer wouldn't hurt but other than that this is a great story!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

Oh yeah that's in the next chapter. It might be the biggest fan service chapter in the story. I appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: mjfan45 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2015 6:14 AM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

Also i liked the feet scenes so far 

Reviewer: mjfan45 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2015 6:12 AM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

great story!!

however it seems like everytime i say that the author stops writing around ch6

so please... dont be like the other authors... PLEASE finish this story all the way

also.. to Flaming_Heart please keep on reviewing...



Author's Response:

I have twelve chapters already written :), I'll go ahead and post the next one now. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 9:04 PM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

Good start to the story. You should space out your paragraphs a little more. So it's not just blocks of text.

Reviewer: goku321 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 4:09 PM Title: Just a Simple Trip to the Library

Really like this story, especially the feet parts. ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks! There is more of that to come!

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