Reviews For Omega: Touch
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Reviewer: happiest_in_shadows Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 5:38 AM Title: Attention

Well Neil has been having a rough day. I'm certain that he was aware his family considered him embarassing but he probably never imagined they'd turn him out like this. I do wonder if some member of the family might have been pushing for it harder than the others. He may even wonder if he'd even be alive if this had happened before the omegas came to be. Probably not a thought he wants to entertain but there it is.

I do wonder what Lucy intends to do though. She's angry so she's probably not thinking ahead too much but if they're willing to turn out their son without any of his belongings what does she hope anything she might say will accomplish? 



Author's Response:

You're making some good guesses; we'll find out more about Neil's family in the next couple chapters.

Lucy's plans so far probably just entail knocking on the door and socking whoever answers it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 5:23 AM Title: Interrogation

Lucy is a good girl but a bit impluvive. Confront Neil's bad parents specially you're blind and you've a beta guy on your shoulder = not a very idea. 



Author's Response:

You're right that Lucy is acting more on anger instead of thinking this through. Neil will have to try to make her see this before things go bad.

Reviewer: Kusanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2015 4:21 AM Title: Interrogation

I like the take on the family, not the usual obviously abusive, but clearly cold and unloving. Kicked him out the second it was legal to do so. Hope Lucy kicks their asses.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. This family is meant to represent a common mindset of mixed families in the Omega world; even if they don't physically abuse their Beta, there's still a lot of problems.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 9:47 PM Title: Attention

Yep this is going to be another good addition to the series. Can't wait!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 12:34 PM Title: Attention

Ah, what a way to introduce a blind character(right?). Ackbar said we'd enjoy this story, and he couldn't have been more right. Thank you for the chapter, it was awesome reading it.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear you enjoyed it. And yes, Lucy is blind.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 9:32 AM Title: Attention

Good start!I wonder what's Neill's problem! I like aslo Omega/Beta kids meet & greet! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! We'll see what his problem is in the next chapter.

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