[Report This]Date: January 12 2024 8:40 PM Title: Attention
I didn’t expect to enjoy this nearly as much as I did. The best ways size played into Lucy’s blindness, the extremely bittersweet return of probably my favorite characters in this universe, and the extremely cathartic way the family was treated. Lucy is truly quite the sight to behold, and I can only imagine how she would be as an omega. I absolutely love her way of doing things. Maybe makes me like Jenna a bit more now.
[Report This]Date: August 13 2016 8:06 PM Title: Way
"You can relax. She’s the goodie-two-shoes,” the Alpha said, feigning trying to keep Bridget from hearing, and only giggled as the Omega’s thumb gave her a playful jab in the shoulder before proceeding to tickle the smaller girl’s stomach without mercy. “Except to me. She’s a freaking huge jerk to me.”
“Nonsense. I’m a perfect angel,” Bridget snickered dryly.
And this went from being fun and enjoyable to being harsher in hindsight. Still a good story, though.
Just out of curiosity, did you get my PM? I wasn't sure if it actually went through or not.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the story. I haven't had any new messages come in recently, though.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2016 8:53 PM Title: Attention
A little late, but better late than never I guess.
I thought I was one of the only authors to have written a story about a blind giantess, but guess not. This was an amazing story! I wish I would've read this before writing mine, as you seemed to have handled the subject matter much better than myself.
I'd love to see more of these characters in the future. Do you have any more stories with Lucy?
Author's Response:
It's definitely interesting subject matter, trying to work that into a character. Glad you liked the story! I don't have any plans for Lucy to return right now, but I'm not opposed to it someday.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2015 2:34 PM Title: Way
An adorable ending. However, I was somewhat disappointed that there wasn't as much actual hand interaction as I was expecting, given the set up and the title. It's certainly an aspect about this fetish I love, and what you did end up putting in was very enjoyable. Hopefully, this lovely pair will have more appearances in the future.
Nonetheless, another great piece once again.
Author's Response:
Fair. As I wrote, the story shifted from the hand focus I originally had into one about this act Lucy is going through for her friend. Glad to hear you still enjoyed it; as always, I appreciate your commentary.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2015 4:59 PM Title: Way
This was a really good short story. You have to bring these characters back! I just feel connect to them like the other characters in the Omega series. Can't wait for the next story.
Thanks Jack:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I do enjoy writing the characters, so if I find a good way, I'll bring them back. Look forward to hearing your comments as always.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2015 7:42 AM Title: Way
Damn, great stuff
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: June 26 2015 7:32 AM Title: Way
Is this Bridget and Alexandra before or after "Inheritance"?
Author's Response:
This is 3 years before Inheritance.
Date: June 23 2015 1:07 AM Title: Attention
Damn. Reading this made me want to break a nose or two. Extremely well written.
Author's Response:
You and Lucy both. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 22 2015 10:00 PM Title: Back-up
Awe, this is such a good story. I love how the main character are a bunch of misfits. Are we going to see these characters again? In future stories in addition to the series?
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't have current plans to bring back Lucy and Neil, though I never say never. I certainly like them enough to consider it.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2015 3:01 PM Title: Attention
OMG! I'm am so happy two see Bridget and Lexi!!! Makes me happy one of my favorite stories. Holy crap Lucy is a force to be reckoned with! Neil is very lucky!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! And Lucy certainly doesn't mess around.
Date: June 22 2015 4:35 AM Title: Back-up
Ooh, a character from another omega story, I love the reference. My heart pounds at the drama this chapter! Lucy displaying the fury of one thousand suns here, and I can already feel 2 endings. The first is a happily ever after ending with love and cozy cottages, and the other is tragic and heartbreaking yet fitting nonetheless.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you appreciated seeing Lexi and Bridget. And you'll see which ending is correct in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2015 10:34 PM Title: Mission
Awe right as they were getting to the good part. Love this addition to the story.
Author's Response:
Hopefully there will be good parts aplenty in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2015 4:19 PM Title: Mission
Really loving this story so far, I hope Lucy doesn't bite off more than she can chew.
In any case, was the wink by Neil in the second last paragraph an impulse thing, or is Lucy actually able to tell that he did it by sensing the impact of the sound waves from his eyelids slapping against each other?
I don't know much about blindness, but I'm fairly certain one can't see winks.
Neat chapter though, I love their interactions with each other.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. The wink was indeed just an impulse; Lucy can't detect it.
Date: June 16 2015 11:27 AM Title: Mission
Oh boyz, lucie is quiet hot ane short-temper: an uppercut for a comment! al least Neil got (Omega!?) backup for her!
Author's Response:
Lucy doesn't handle mistreatment of her friends well. And the backup may or may not be Omega.
[Report This]Date: June 16 2015 8:22 AM Title: Mission
I can't believe I just realized she's blind.(I hope it specifically wasn't addressed because I missed it completely)
Now I understand their unique relationship a bit better.
This story is very entertaining and I can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. The blindness was referenced, but it is only directly mentioned a couple of times in the story. I had intended for it to be something people realized as they read.
Date: June 16 2015 4:57 AM Title: Mission
Some random text at the end wanted my comment; I feel wanted b25;. I hope the backup is omega company of one sort or another, it feels like it is.
Author's Response:
Always feel wanted! Thanks for reading.
Date: June 16 2015 4:22 AM Title: Mission
Very sweet scene at the end there and while Neil couldn't talk her down he at least made sure she's not going to go it alone.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 11 2015 6:05 PM Title: Interrogation
Hmm, this statement has me concerned: "you pretty much just choose the one you want and they toss you the keys, nothing else."
Does that mean there are no homeless Betas? I suppose it's easy and good to solve the problem of homelessness simply because it would be easy for Omegas to achieve such a feat, especially for Betas. However, if everything is handed to Betas, what is there to work for? What incentive? Do beta's just become pets, unable to care for themselves? Lucy means well, but her first instincts are to bring Neil to her house (dollhouse?) and fight Neil's fight for him.
Realistically, Omegas, in their exalted wisdom, should put an end to this mixed soceity and section Betas off into their own land. Relations between Alphas and Betas causes more harm than good.
Of course, if that happened, readers (including myself) would lose interest due to the lack of giantess interaction. So we're glad that isn't the case in this world. But separating Betas and Alphas is what *should* happen...if we're being realistic.
There probably are still some homeless Betas around, but the free apartments thing is an attempt to eliminate that issue eventually. The incentive is for basically everything else; the Omegas don't just hand out the food and other amenities required. They're just trying to give a boost so the Betas have a good starting point for autonomy. Lucy is just planning on putting Neil in his own little bed in her room, not a dollhouse. There actually are areas around the world where the races aren't quite as mixed. This particular city where all of the current stories take place just happens to be promoting it the most as the current epicenter for the Omegas. I think everything I just said is accurate, though I would as usual defer to Ackbar for universe-related queries like this.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: June 08 2015 1:59 PM Title: Interrogation
Yep things are heating up in a hurry. And Neil is a terrible liar.
Author's Response:
He is indeed.
Date: June 08 2015 1:35 PM Title: Attention
Well not gonna lie. Extremely interested in this one. I think this is the first blind giantess I've seen so far and its very interesting
Author's Response:
Thanks! That aspect of her character was mostly what made me interested in writing this story.