Reviews For Unexpected
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Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2023 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

I wish we had some growing moms too, I want too see them getting even bigger and hotter than girls.

Reviewer: gemm1mt Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2017 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

Awesome man.

Reviewer: imagin8 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story a lot, it was very pleasant and the lovemaking scenes were well-written. I am a big fan of this kind of size difference, and the NWO scenario was well thought out. My main criticism would be that everything was so lovely that there wasn't any real drama or intrigue, but that's more of a personal preference - not every tale has to be driven by conflict.

Reviewer: newmark42 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. The double perspective was fun.

 

One critique...


It seems like addy was too tall for much of the interaction.  16 ft means her hands would be around 7ft high as she walked. There is no way she would run into Alex and catch him.

Reviewer: newmark42 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. The double perspective was fun.

 

One critique...


It seems like addy was too tall for much of the interaction.  16 ft means her hands would be around 7ft high as she walked. There is no way she would run into Alex and catch him.

Reviewer: Sir Purple Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

They are so perfect together. I hope to see a chapter in which Alex's ex from the beginning of the story will want to have Alex back but Addy will confront her (and maybe will have a little fight?).

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 9

WOW!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

A sweet loving pair where I must say you've kept it fresh enough so us readers don't grow tired of their love making!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Im loving this so far! You really know how to write sexy characters, and i love the perspective shifting!

Reviewer: zhengguoguangxi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is so nice! i like the feeling of this story! i hope u will write more story like this

Reviewer: wwebby Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2015 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

So awesome, even though the chapters are short! I like your characters a lot.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ah, how refreshing! A couple who don't ruin the afterglow by smoking. For that, alone, I would give you eleven points (if I could).

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

 Great sex scene, these people are just so sweet together, well done!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 7

As Chris Rock might say:

"Day-Am! Them endorphins of theirs be on overdrive!"

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very enjoyable. You're pacing their interactions well, and have a definite knack for finding fun in the subtlety of their teasing.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 7

Good chapter, we learned more about the ascended lifestyle without chunky exposition, got more insight into Alex and Addy and I sense the marathon sex is coming soon!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

How much you want to bet the three of them will have a ménage a trois "cum" Sunday night?

Reviewer: Sir Purple Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

You know,  it's hard to find a short chapters story that is so good. You are doing an incredible job with this story.

Also as one who usually prefer to avoid reading the giantess POV, I have to admit reading Abby's chapters is even better than Alex's..

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

This story is so much win! I just got through it all and it is really good!

Alex and Addy have this flirty, kiddish, attitude to them both and they both seem like real people. And I'm really digging the perspective shifting. To be honest, I like the Addy chapters better, something about her character and "squeee!" attitude towards Alex and inner thoughts really hit home with me.

That's saying something too since I'm a dude and generally prefer the male perspective in these stories, so it's a testemant to how well the writting in this is coming along!

Consider me a regular from now on!

Reviewer: White Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Looking forward to it!  Should be "steamy" indeed :)

I also like the addition of another ascended in the cast.  Might she play a larger role?  At least now you have her as a secondary in case you want to go that route.  A double date at some point in the future could be an awesome way to show gender dynamics outside of one-on-one. 

Great work, I'm really digging their easy relationship.

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