Date: August 09 2017 9:43 AM Title: Morals and Desire
And here's another great Chapter!
The part in which Haile says she has no one that could feed her made me feel a little sad for her.. I mean, she has tons of followers, lots of money, thousands of tiny slaves.. but if it wasn’t for Sarah, she would be alone.
I sensed from the begin that Sarah and Haile would come back together eventually, and I’m very happy to see I was right. Even if there is still some kind of tension between them because of Haile’s diet, I think they can make it work again.
The scene in which Sarah fed Haile was impressive and full of emotions. I think you exposed Sarah’s feelings incredibly well.
I also liked a lot the beach rampage and the fact that Haile was searching for a companion for her future rampages. :3
PS: Allí has been disposed in front of Jasmine’s camera and you didn’t showed us? How could you be so mean to us? ;)
Date: June 01 2017 3:30 AM Title: Morals and Desire
Oh man, you're e-p-i-c!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! ^_^