Date: August 07 2017 12:44 PM Title: Home Depot
This first chapter started with a terrifying gruesome game but it was terrific as always.
Anyway, since from the begin there are a couple of things I needed to point out.
First of all, it’s clear that Haile is hungry due to the low amount of food she had to eat in the last weeks, and in fact you say she’s very hungry.. Isn’t it a shame to waste part of her food by just killing them and leve them into the box?
The second thing is personal, so feel free to ignore what I’m going to say.
The tiny people into the first box stares helplessly at their “friends” dying horribly one by one. That’s something terrifying to say the least, so I expected to see you deeper exploring this situation, pointing out the anguish they feel and the extreme contrast with the careless emotions of Haile.
Though, I have to say that what you did later with the 2 twins was so cool and well done that made me wonder if you read my thoughts. :D
Date: February 21 2017 8:51 AM Title: Home Depot
This latest chapter was incredible, I think Haile might be my favourite giantess ever. She's so sadistically cruel to tinies and yet seemingly a perfectly nice person around others her size. When she started talking about blood making everything prettier though, you got the sense that she has some real issues.
Personally, I hope things stay at this level of "intensity" as much as possible. This is one of the best written violent giantess stories I've ever read, and Haile is such a fascinatingly perverse character I'm wary of any major changes in tone in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! She does have some issues, you're right. Don't be too wary, it's not a completely new story. In fact, I'm about to post the next chapter so you can let me know what you think about it. The main thing is the story is moving on, because too much of the same thing can be boring, and as such Part 2 will be written a bit differently; but will still show the same Haile that everyone has come to know and love, or is love the right word? Who knows. Fear perhaps. We'll see! --HK