Date: August 05 2017 8:09 AM Title: Boring Adult Stuff
At first I had the feeling that what Haile did to the electric plant in the tiny world had had a consequence in the real world.. if that's the case, it would be really awesome.
It means that there is some kind of interconnection between universes, something that ties them in a mutual unpredictable relationship. :)
Alli is very cute and rather brave considering the situation, not many people would act as sh does but I can relate to her, because for her it's basically a fantasy that became reality.
The glowing stomach is a conveninent way to explain how you can take shots insiede it, but I can't imagine anyone offer himself for cameraman work and doing it decently, knowing that by doing so, they're going to die after a slow and terrible agony.
The barefoot crushing scene was my favourite by the way, It was well explained and full of details.
Considering your skills when it comes to vore, I think you could do better.. but anyhow I really appreciate your effort. I totally understand the difficulties you're facing in doing that. I guess It's like when I have to deal with vore scenes in my works. I try to do my best, but I know I will never be as good as someone that has a deep passion for it.