Reviews For The Perfect Pearl
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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2023 5:04 AM Title: White Gemstones

Great idea, but I found the execution (or description therein) was a bit lacking in this one as it was hard to figure out what exactly was taking place, even though I knew what the end result would be. I would just advise - if something is expanding or shinking, describe it. The ending was pretty good.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2015 2:10 PM Title: White Gemstones

Another good story to add to your collection. Always a pleasure to see new work from you.

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