Date: November 24 2015 11:11 PM Title: McKendra
Where are the 24 other chapters?
Author's Response:
Finally going up, part by part!
[Report This]Date: April 21 2015 11:39 AM Title: McKendra
Is this... part one of a twenty five part series? If so, I'm very excited. And even if you never get around to the other stories this one was pretty good. :-) I really enjoyed Kendra's attitude, which I think any of us who's ever worked retail or in fast food can identify with. The little peek into the backstory at the end was also great, even if the rest felt a little rushed. Thanks so much for sharing, can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Author's Response:
I appreciate your thoughts! I might re-write McKendra a little bit, I'm not entirely satisfied with it, but I think I'll finish the rest of the series before I get to that part.
[Report This]Date: April 17 2015 8:07 PM Title: McKendra
Good start, seemed he got kind of screwed though.
Author's Response:
¯_(ツ)_/¯
Sucks to be him, but he won't be the only one getting an unfair shake, here!
[Report This]Date: April 17 2015 3:54 PM Title: McKendra
What a fantastic 1st chapter. I love food vore and especially cruel revenge scenerio. Very creative and cant wait to see more
Author's Response:
Feel free to request something if you have anything specific in mind! You can find upcoming chapters in the first chapter.