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Reviewer: combine45 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

Cool, that's kinda what I thought about the Tyrant. I'm glad you did it that way, leaves it open to interpretation, or maybe a potential sequel. It certainly seems like she is either more forgiving with Ambrose, or had that planned the whole time.

I'd like to see where this could go after what's happend. Ambrose should hate her, but is obviously attracted to her. She seems to like playing with him more mentaly than physically torturing him for now. 

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Date: June 25 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 3

Damn that was a great story, I've been trying to write something like that for a while. It was amazing how the whole world was set up just to please her. The only thing bad about this story is I wan't more! I was wondering if the Tyrant had special feelings for Ambrose or if conviding in the Assistent about her past is something she always did. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'm a fan of dystopian worlds, especially ones where giants/giantesses terrorize tiny people, and half the fun of writing this story was creating the setting. In terms of the Tyrant's feelings for Ambrose, it's difficult to tell (she could genuinely care for him or she could be playing around with him like she does to everyone else).

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

The final chapter was unexpected. I'm not usually a fan of violent stories, I have to say. Somehow this story kept me interested. Guess I wasn't the only person to think of Nineteen-Eighty-Four by George Orwell. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Merciless and delectable, as always. I wonder if Ambrose isn't the first such Assistant to receive the honor of the Tyrant's special attention. If she ever goes through with the notion of granting him the power of increasing his size, I quite imagine Sophia will be featured in his initiation. 



Author's Response:

I don't think that I'm capable of writing about merciful giants/giantesses, I'm afraid. Ambrose probably isn't the first Assistant to capture the Tyrant's attention...she's fond of messing with people. I suppose that when one is immortal and has godlike powers, he/she needs to keep themselves entertained somehow. It would be interesting to see what Ambrose would do, given similar abilities. Perhaps he'd keep his humanity and refuse to play her games. Or perhaps he'd be as bad as the Tyrant.

Reviewer: tingle01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow I really love the story so far. 

You have me hooked



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that you've been enjoying it so far, tingle01. :)

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