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Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 6:23 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

The idea of a baby will definitely not fly with the mom.



Author's Response:

Then again, probably very little of anything will fly with the mom.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 9:48 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

Great chapter 2, especially the bomb dropped at the end.  I've often considered shrinkers having a child, but in a circumstance like this it should weigh particualrly heavily.



Author's Response:

Thanks! It seemed like the thing to do with this first story to establish that even if things seem potentially pleasant, there's always some darker implication involved too.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 6:36 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

yeah they are lucky to have Sherry. they just watch our for the mom. Still shocked to know families sell its shrunken members! Love to know their reasons in future.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. In this world, for many it's a source of shame to have a shrinker as a family member since they are seen as less than human, so they are resented for that. There are other reasons depending on the family, too.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 9:31 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

At least  Sherry seems nice, though the couple might need to worry about her mother.



Author's Response:

Probably an understatement there.

Reviewer: Rodan1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 6:57 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

Fantastic story! I bet the tiny couple and any future pets will teach her about the birds and the bees, or at the very least become a live action tiny porno for her and her friends. Maybe she can introduce them to her other pets, like a snake or horny rat? Maybe she can make them do it in a dollhouse, or a cage with a pacman frog? Maybe she can take them to show and tell, or sell them as they do it? Can you please discribe if they are naked or dressed in a chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Most shrinkers wear something similar to a swimsuit, so they are partially exposed, though not naked (this can change though if their owner decides otherwise). And you may be on to something with Sherry's possible intentions.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 3:25 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

Loved the chapter.  You did a great job of selecting details to share to make a familiar scene fresh and exciting.

I know that the shrink virus is a heavily used scenario around here, but I find it's a great way to get to the meat of the story rather than wallow in set and exposition.  I'm very excited to see an anthology series from you set in such a world.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! My thought is that a world scenario most people are already familiar with would free up space for fun character interactions. I hope the forthcoming posts leave similar impressions.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 3:17 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

Will there be a story on how the manager trains the little ones to behave for the customers?

Author's Response:

I wasn't planning on it, as I'll be trying to write about different sets of characters/situations in each story, but I'll never say never

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 3:12 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

Love the set up. All 5 are great characters. A very realistic scene. The manager obviously runs a nice shrink smart (great name) . I hope the girl gets them and a cage.. Will the girl forget to clean up after them and maybe the mother gets annoyed that she has to reach in and clean up after the little things. You write very well. Putting this in favorites.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing! There will be some answers about the fates of the characters in the second half of this short story

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 1:18 AM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

Quite a change, which isn't bad. It's going to be quite interesting see how this short stories collide. And there all good to be amazing story. Since that's all you write. Like black mail series or Julia.

Author's Response:

Thanks! The short stories won't really be colliding, so to speak, but they'll each be adding more information about this particular world, which may help with context for others

Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 9:47 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

This story concept is great. I can wait to hear about more scenarios.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much! More will be on the way soon

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 7:14 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

Looking forward to your take on this angle.



Author's Response:

Thanks man

Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 7:14 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

oops, forgot to rate. 

Reviewer: Badguy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 7:13 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

I'm definitely excited to see more unaware from you. You're a great writer. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! One of the episodes of this story will be primarily unaware, so hopefully it delivers.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 2:38 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

The title could've been better but i like so far the concept. and i hope you update soon julia



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I did not want the title to be too restrictive since it has to contain a lot of very different stories, plus I enjoy double-meaning titles.

Reviewer: Chekhovs Gum Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 2:04 PM Title: ShrinkSmart (Part 1)

I'm liking it so far, and I'm definitely interested to see where this goes and what you do with it. I personally think the best part of the tiny population world is that it's loose enough to fit in several genres, and although worn, the right writer can make it work. There's something about normalizing the shrunken people that I really like, so there's that as well.

Also, I definitely wouldn't want to be left alone with the mom. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks very much. The normalization of shrinking completely changes the landscape of the universe in these kinds of stories, so I like to play with it. I hope to try to make this particular fairly-familiar concept new again for readers who've been around the block a few times.

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