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Reviewer: Killer_Huge Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2018 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just wanted to chime in to say I'm a big fan of all your stories on this site. I think you do growth better than just about anybody and you're definitely a big influence on my GTS writing. This one-shot is one of my favorites of all time.  I hope you'll write a new story some time!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it. I want to see her continue to grow. Have you thought about a story where a middle aged woman alien arrives on earth in her spaceship. She finds that the people on earth are 1 inch tall. She decides that they need a God or Goddess.

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Man, do I miss this particular kind of story from this particular author! Of course, this rather short -but-spicy variation on the so familiar (and so beloved, by this reader) theme of "a (mature) woman's lust overshadows, but never eradicates her genuine affection for the little guy" cannot portray the same kind of emotional depth and bonding as for instance the wonderful "A chance with a cougar". But still it echoes the same powerful idea at the core, and I can do no else but sincerely wish for more - more littlemac stories! :D

Reviewer: Starlord73 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope this is not the only chapter of this story please continue it

Reviewer: ltltb Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like your variations on a theme of shrinking making mature woman more attractive to younger men. Also like the mother-daughter conflict. I'm dealing with a similar scenario in an ongoing story of mine. 

Reviewer: tritty Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not a bad story but the name Dolores is kind of a turn-off for me. It conjures up a mental image of a granny.

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