[Report This]Date: September 29 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 8: Victory’s Sacrifice
Ooooooh! The Swords have developed some kind of pain-killing steroid?
I'll bet it's to aid them in some near-future coup d'état against the rest of their matriarchy.
Date: September 29 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 8: Victory’s Sacrifice
amazing chapter! So Cuntilda was doped or drugged as it esplain her strenght.
Too sad for Holland but at least he died as a hero like KazumaR1 said.
PS Are there more poser/images for After High Act stories?
Author's Response:
A possible explaination.
Indeed and thanks for ythe kind words.
PS: Yes, if you go http://zanderasgoth17.deviantart.com/gallery/ there, you can see the cover photos for Act 1, 2 in their respect folders while 3 is right there. 2.5 doesn't have one yet.
Date: September 28 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: Victory’s Sacrifice
I don't really care for Gabriel as a character. She feels too much like a man with boobs. I think she needs more vulnerable moments where she isn’t G.I Jane. I hope we get back to the main plot soon but I will say these chapters provided some good character development for Alice at least since all she was before this was the 'stoic analytical girl'
The Elves were pretty cool and at least Holland died a hero.
While Matilda was a straight up monster I wonder if she was just a morally corrupt person in general or her environment made her that way. Not to mention since she was abusing drugs that dulled pain perhaps that had a factor into her overall behavior. Not trying to defend her, just curious.
Author's Response:
I am going to guess you mean Gabby feels too much like a characture and not that a woman HAS to have vulnerable moments to be a woman. Assuming I am right, I have a plan, don't worry. In fact, we have seen something VERY important to her backstory, just it hasn't... hit so to speak. 2.5 was more about developing the Elves and Alice, not Gabby, but Act 3 will have a lot more focus on her as a character.
As for Matilda, I'm kinda leaving that a bit of a blank space on purpose. If stuff winds up not working out like I think I might go back and explain more about her.