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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2015 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 2: #pocketparker

Short but sweet, a little bit longer would help.

I loved the idea of a cell phone shrinking with him and how he has sucess in telling people he shrunk but they just dont care and make fun of him.

I'm anxious to see how Kit and Nick develop as characters.

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