Thanks lfcfan, I'm really glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the rating.

I usually avoid immortal tinies unless I need them to take a particular beating that regular humans at that size simply wouldn't survive. I had to be careful not to get too rough with the victim in Grudge for this exact reason.

Personally I'm not usually a fan of stories with tinies getting the upper hand, escaping or finding ways to get back at their captor. For me it doesn't work as let's face it, if you were an inch tall at the feet of some insane and blood thirsty succubus you'd be dead within a single step.

I'm going to try and finish Zoetrope over the next two weeks or so, working up to a spectacularly steamy ending for my other 'immortal' tiny or Shrinky, before thinking of ways to change direction and try something new.

Suggestions always welcome :)

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I'm really glad you liked it, thank you.

As you wish, I hope you like the finished result.

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