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Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it! Will you ever work on a third chapter?

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Date: March 01 2015 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

A clumsy overweight teacher who killed her brother unaware with her belly button trying to get revenge on her ex-student  for a stupid reason while being clumsy without malice?

This is gold.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning

Man, the writing is beautiful!

I love the fact that you value dirty panties as a way of entrapment for a shrunken slave. Nice touch

Only thing I didn't like was that she was a BBw but that's just my opinion so you don't have to change it.

Other than that, this seems like a very promising story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: February 13 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning

Holy shit! THIS IS EPIC! KEEP IT COMING! You write the way I like it

Reviewer: kongoboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning

Well I really thought the start of this story was informative and well written, Please keep going!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The beginning

Nice start. Looking forward to more. Nice job.

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