Nice chapter, it got pretty intense at the end there. Wow you're really good at storytelling, it's flows perfectly at a nice pace. Plus the chapters are a good length.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the other things beside feet. I'd love to see playful interaction.

Nice chapter, the story is developing nicely. I love the characters, there both unique expecially Mckayla.
Also I'm glad you took my other review into consideration. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it. Hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for reading :)

Love the story so far. Till it got to the feet part. As long as you balance the story with other things beside feet. I'll be a big fan.

I'll probably still read your story, even if you don't consider my review. But there is only so much I can handle. So including other parts of Mckayla's body would be awesome.

Author's Response:

That was one of the goals actually of this story. I do like feet so that will obviously be more prominant than the others, but I'll do my best to add other things. I wouldn't say by anymeans that every part of her will receive an equal amount of  attention. I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far, and thanks for your input. It is noted and appreciated. Thanks for reading!