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Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 6:02 PM Title: While Fate Sleeps

Totally loved the last chapters where Olivia stepped into the story and especially the ending :-)

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 1:17 PM Title: While Fate Sleeps

What I find particularly demeaning is that while Eli gets to go spelunking and the ladies certainly get their jollies,  Eli can't even take credit for bringing his hostesses off.  The dildo is doing all the work, and Eli is just along for the goopy ride.

I love it.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 10:21 PM Title: While Fate Sleeps

Yes! Going to be messiier and smellier.

 

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 10:21 PM Title: While Fate Sleeps

Yes! Going to be messiier and smellier.

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 9:53 PM Title: While Fate Sleeps

Wow, you post chapters fast!

I'm not much of a fan of Olivia, but I like her aggressiveness.

Looking forward for the next chapter.

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