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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 7:38 PM Title: Steamy

My goodness!

I think I found a new concept that makes me want to read more. If a woman starts imagining possibilities for her little man, I keep saying 'Yes!' to each idea anticipating it.

All you stories have fantastic dialogue and it always seems so realistic! Eli has many reasons to be into it at first, and I know many couples that want to spice things up. A contract also makes it legit, becuase now it's more like an official business that hundreds or thousands of women have participated in.

I wish he was drenched in her juices rather than his own cum, but it's still a great idea. Entrapment with liquid inside. Very creative.

I feel like Candy has her own toy. She seems way to cheerful, but that's kinda how most clerks are which makes it even more realistic.

Size change, color, temperature, vibrations!!? Wow, this business has gone far!

I wish more people write entrapment stories. Most won't top your ideas but I hope these ideas can spread.

I would love to hear about other women and their experiences with their toys. That little segment from chapter 2 can be a story on its own.

I would love to read about a woman who straps a tiny man to the inside of her panties, and this guy is gagged as well. I could go on and on, but wow, this story just gives me so many ideas!

Keep it up!

I also love your little description for you story. The part of a sex toy shop for adults. That definitely lured me in to read this.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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