[Report This]Date: January 30 2023 5:00 AM Title: Faye Rising
Very good erotic story for much of it. I really like the Cherry store concept. A bit too much scat play for my taste. Also, I don't mind a good vengeance story or a bit of humiliation, but at some point, if it goes on and on, the torture begins to drift from the tiny to the reader. I think it could have if the ending was tacked on to chapter 12, it would have been a more enjoyable story.
Date: April 13 2018 2:48 AM Title: Faye Rising
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Date: May 23 2015 4:54 PM Title: Faye Rising
That was a great Story. I liked it a lot.
Do you take requests? I got some ideas for some toys for cherrys
Author's Response:
I always take requests and love ideas.
Feel free to drop them in a review or by email.
Glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: February 02 2015 11:37 PM Title: Faye Rising
. . . Interesting, to say the least.
If you're still accepting requests, I was hoping you'd take a longer one. I just can't do sexual scenes right, and it's really killing me.
Basically, I was thinking of a people-shrinking equivalent to the old standby, the psychotic stalker. Our main character has an extreme lesbian crush on someone at her apartment complex, but all the other tenants keep getting in the way. One by one at first, but slowly moving on to groups, she shrinks and murders everyone standing in her way, to the increasing discomfort of her crush. Once the two of them are alone, our main character finally makes her move, only to be spurned and pull the classic "if I can't have you . . .". Ending at your discretion.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2015 8:57 AM Title: Faye Rising
Why no rating then @other reviewer :3 Awesome story!! Great length too this time, and just loved the ending. I guess Faye's reaction will be a little bir more than "ooops", when she notices what she did ;) But it was just a toy anyway right, and she had the contract telling she could do anything wit "it" she wanted, even throw it into the waste bin after "use".
Date: February 01 2015 2:32 AM Title: Faye Rising
I like it! Only concern is if she will be disappointed if he dies.
Grammer is good, spelling is goood. The details and imagery are descriptive and give the reader a great picture without being confusing.