Date: December 10 2020 2:20 AM Title: Episode 4...Living in the Past
Ok wow!
I have been meaning to read this story for awhile now and was looking for a good chapter to start on (I sometimes read non-linear if the story contains oneshot chapters)
And this one just hooked me!
The sexual content and description was done so well, and the time travel aspect!!
The fact that Danielle unknowingly 'caused' her parents death like that, her presence set off a time loop that will repeat itself over and over again.
That was such a great plot aspect you worked in, and knowing young Danielle is going to grow up and go through it (while fucked up that her dad and mom do that to her) makes their reaction right at the end to discovering the truth all the more satisfying.
Why does this chapter not have more reviews, hell why doesn't this story have more reviews??!?!
I am definitely going to read more of this, fantastic work.