[Report This]Date: January 19 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hm... You're good... Still not exactly sure what they plan to do with her... Given their cannibalism of the sacrificed girl, I still think they may plan to eat the Virgin from the inside out. My only other idea is that although they're tiny people they function similar to tapeworms, forcibly entering a host and holding a parasitic relationship with them until they're extracted or the host dies from malnutrition. For me the second theory seems more likely, considering what Jawm said about her considering keeping him and Zdua as pets. It wouldn't make sense for him to think that if the ritual killed her immediately/induced trauma that would kill her in a few hours. Unless he wasn't around for the last ritual...
Author's Response:
Well, you're right about one of those things. whatever the outcome or method to how they 'use' her, it doesn't bode well for the Virgin, that's for sure. I'd love to say more, but i really want to finish this story- i have a million billion stories in outline form that will never see the light of day. Ironically, most of them are super gentle gts stuff. This was just kind of a catharsis for me. I read your bio as well- you're way into violent stuff; im glad this story could fill a hole for you (haha its funny because vagina). Anyways, thanks as hell for reading- looking forward to what you think of future chapters (when they finally roll out)
Date: January 18 2015 8:25 AM Title: Prelude
Seems it was a mistake on my part , really thought you were going to do a flashback of how she got to that part.
Author's Response:
I could see how that might get someone confused- the prelude was meant to be a sort of 'in media res,' showing the Virgin (the large woman the scouts are stalking) tied up and about to be defiled/sacrificed/whatever. The smaller lady who got her throat slashed over the Virgin's mouth and eaten by her tribe was just kind of a pre-sacrifice, a similitude (think how the ancient jews sacrificed lambs in preparation for their coming messiah).
ayway, thanks a lot for reading. I think I'll give that Jack and jessica story another shot (if i dont reach through the screen and murder jack myself)
Date: January 17 2015 11:25 AM Title: Prelude
Her throat's been cut and it looks she'll be defiled. I go by bloodlust45 on City incase you don't know. Back to the girl well, it doesn't look goof for her does she? However please surprise me, I would love it if you did that.
Author's Response: Ha, no- the girl who got her throat cut was someone else. Maybe i didn't make it super clear? But the large woman who is about to be defiled is the namesake Virgin.
Date: January 17 2015 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Are you the same guy on GTS City? Either way, I am really like this story even though we know the Virgin dies at the end of this one.
Author's Response: Hey Nostory! Yes, i am the same Versusterminus7 at gts city. And I'm really glad to know you like the story. Also, how do you know for sure that the Virgin dies in the end? :)
[Report This]Date: January 17 2015 3:36 AM Title: Prelude
Oh god they're gonna eat her.
How do they tell if one is a virgin? (assuming the tinies' definition is identical to ours) I mean, they can't just go by hymen (or lack of) because that can be removed by any number of things like masturbating, tampon usage, horseback riding, etc.
I'm probably looking too deep into this. The only other alternative I can think they would need her for is breeding, as a sort of goddess-mother which could explain their lack of taboo regarding incest... It's still too early to tell.
Author's Response: Yeah you're reading too deeply into this. How they find out she is a virgin is not by any obvious means- this is, after all, a fantasy story at it's heart. Magical beings, magical means, taking place in our world. As the story unfolds, I'll reveal a bit more about the characters, most of which you've already met. I really hope you enjoyed it. Thank you for the review!