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Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

Chloe could nap.

And Frankie be digested slowly, counting every detail digestion until Frankie turn into fat and feces, and their bones expelled following day.Chloe only find out after seeing a small skeleton in the stool.

Then continue with another person shrunken. 



Author's Response:

im pretty sure she will end up fully digested at some point :) for no id like to try and get her in a few differant situations just to make it a bit of a longer story, i like your idea though, i may work out a way to add another tiny!

Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Frankie. Who would have thought Chloe could have been so careless! Pretty hot chapter, loved the descriptions. Might have been nice to have more details from Frankie's point of view after she was knocked off into Chloe's fingers, but that's only a suggestion. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you for the reveiw :) yeah I wanted to make it a really long chapter with a PoV of frankie to but didnt have the time. IT will be made up for in the next chapter hopefully :)

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