Date: July 29 2018 10:33 PM Title: Afterword
This Story was Amazing! Where is that sequel tho?
[Report This]Date: March 31 2016 7:08 AM Title: Afterword
Good ending! I was expecting a sad ending where he stuck at this small size but I changed my mind after reading that you are going to do a sequel. I enjoy myself a lot with this story and I'm sure that the sequel will be great too. Being shrunken in a party surrounded by beautiful unaware teenage girls sounds cool. I woud like to see interactions with Samatha after knowing about her oblivious nature.
Author's Response:
It would have been pretty cool to end the story on a sad note, but the potential for more stories and more sexy situations was much too great for me to resist! I'm happy that you liked the story though, and that you're looking forward to Samantha. I'm also looking forward to write about her, as she's going to be our protagonist's newest nightmare. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: March 30 2016 6:01 PM Title: Afterword
Anyone sang the "words words words" to Rihanna's work, work, work? I did.
Ok, this story was great. I actually liked the ending and how Julia kept her word.
Ok, now for the sequel. 4 girls, 3 guys. Or will there be more women?
Since this is at a high school, could there be a sexy, slightly horny teacher? Perhaps some detention, after school help, private tutoring? Office hours?
Samantha seems just like Kiana. Kiana is already oblivious to everything. I hope we see something new in Samantha.
I hope Kiana will still be the sexy one of the group. She was great this story.
I think we need someone like Julia to put these shrunken guys in places where they get in some sexy situations. Ex. Kiana.
Maybe a school nurse. She can "help" these boys. These guys may ask her for help, but instead, they get some fun.
Perhaps a hot mom or milf. There were a few mentions of Kiana's mom and Julia's mom but no action with them. Maybe they want some hot young guys at their disposal.
You can add a girls locker room, cheerleaders the squad, or practice in sports. School gym? Aerobics, yoga class? "Ok, class. Take the tiny man and gently slide him up and down your cleavage. Yes, that's it. Keep it up girls".
What if someone else finds the shrink gun?
I'm suggesting a lot of people becuase since it's a school, I expect lots of contact with new people.
A girl uses a little guy to help her chest on a test.
Girls gets caught cheating on test, teacher takes the man and disciplines him. :)
Use more materials, rope, tape, rubber bands, floss. (Girls can tie up a boy)
Dip a guy in some sauce or drink and suck on him like a lollipop.
I will come up with more later. Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm really happy that you liked my story. I also really appreciate your suggestions. As stated, I will take every situation into consideration. I look forward to more ideas! Thanks again.