[Report This]Date: January 16 2015 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack
Great story! when will you post your next chapter?
[Report This]Date: January 12 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack
Definately one of my favorite stories that I've read so far. It has a good scattering of situations that I enjoy, plus a fun vengence driven character, and I'm always a fan of unaware vore. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future!
[Report This]Date: January 08 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack
Interesting idea to have Julia assign the vore task to the unwitting Erica and Kiana. Plenty of graphic description of the eating of Erica's Zack snack.
I'm allergic to milk, or you'd have 5 stars LOL. But seriously, great stuff.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack
Great story !!!
Does Zack will go survive on erika digestion?
[Report This]Date: January 07 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack
If Zack survived that oven temperature, then my guess is that he is immune to her stomach acids.
Either Erica barfs or poops him out.
There is no way the story ended. The sleepover never happened yet. lol
Anyway, if you miss a day of writing, no worries. You write more often than about 90% of the authors on this site. A chapter a day is excellent, and Im glad you are committed on continuing that.
Author's Response: Thanks for understanding. Unfortunately, I've got a few really busy days coming up, but I will try to write when I can. I also don't want to cram in a chapter and have it be not as good as I envisioned it. I really like to put out a chapter every day, but I just need to learn that that isn't always possible. I will do the best that I can, maybe every two days at the very worst. Anyways, thanks for reviewing, and yeah, they didn't even sleep yet!
[Report This]Date: January 07 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack
Love this story, I especially liked the butt chapter! I always love storys where the person is innocent but is assumed guilty. I love the idea of him fianlly getting attention and being able to explain it was the other two guys!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you love the story! Zack clearing up this whole mess may happen eventually...