Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Mistaken Identity

Really want to see this story advance. Currently writing a story also based on being taken care of, I understand the difficulty involved.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Mistaken Identity

Really great story, I just found it today and read it, so far it's awesme. Good unaware micro plots are just too damn rare, even on this site. One critism I have though is the size, you wrote he is around 1 inch, which is way too hugh for unaware, especially of what all happened so far. Also 1 inch doesnt really count as micro. Good micro plots are around 1/16" to 1/8" in between it would be ant size. But the plot is fantastic, and I love revenge or prank scenarios, especially if the story has an unfortunate ending like vore with digestion or anal insertion. My favorite part was chapter 6, but also the saddest, because I was hoping it were going a different way, of full insertion. I would had loved it so much more, if he were laying totally scared on the anus, and if he wasnt shot out by that fart, but fallen through while the anus opened like a fish mouth and he fell directly inside her rectum, the anus shutting of course and wouldnt open anymore, even if he banged against it in totally agony and fear. But I loved how it was Julia in the last part "finding him". My wish or review thouhgts of what should happen would be, her maybe using the shrinking ray a 2nd time, and shrinking him to truly micro suze like ant or dust particle size. Keep up the great work, will of coursr follow this :)