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Reviewer: Stephen1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2020 4:19 AM Title: Prologue - The Incident

Please tell me he's coming back someday

Reviewer: mememan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2018 10:33 PM Title: Afterword

This Story was Amazing! Where is that sequel tho?

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 3:03 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident

This story was simply just brilliant. :) and a pleasure to read and enjoy, even to a totally blind reader.
If I may? Please stop apologising for a wrong you have not committed? Alas, we all are living lives such as they are. Indeed, there are many of us, myself included who have not even started writing a story, let alone writing the final chapter.
Love your work. :)

Reviewer: That_1_Guy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2016 10:53 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident

I absolutely love this story. You are by far the best author I have seen on this site and this is the best story I've seen so far.

I'm really looking toward to reading the sequel and a suggestion I have is maybe you can have someone get involved with someone's shoe, like inside their shoe. Just a thought. If you don't like it, you don't have to put it in.

PEACE!

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2016 7:08 AM Title: Afterword

Good ending! I was expecting a sad ending where he stuck at this small size but I changed my mind after reading that you are going to do a sequel. I enjoy myself a lot with this story and I'm sure that the sequel will be great too. Being shrunken in a party surrounded by beautiful unaware teenage girls sounds cool. I woud like to see interactions with Samatha after knowing about her oblivious nature.



Author's Response:

It would have been pretty cool to end the story on a sad note, but the potential for more stories and more sexy situations was much too great for me to resist! I'm happy that you liked the story though, and that you're looking forward to Samantha. I'm also looking forward to write about her, as she's going to be our protagonist's newest nightmare. Thanks again!

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2016 12:05 AM Title: Prologue - The Incident

I loved this story!  Julia obviously knowsing and not caring was great, I loved the fact that she fianlly kept her word just to regret it.  Then there was kiana, seeing him but not knowing it was him that was amazing with her talking to him.  At the end though with Erica was amazing, she already had a gts fetish and never actually knew about him.  Very nice mix of aware, aware mistaken, and unaware.   I especially love stories where there is a question of who or what the character is.  My fav chapter was probably mistaken identity.

 

Looking forward to sequel and possible other stories.  Just hope there aren't too many people involved, and knowledge of shrinking isn't spread too much



Author's Response:

It makes me feel really good knowing that you loved my story! Writing "Mistaken Identity" was really fun, and it's one of my favorite chapters too. And Erica is a giantess who is going to become more and more prominant to the story, so I hope you look forward to her. Thanks again!

Reviewer: shadowrust Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2016 8:50 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident

Honestly, just what I needed. A solid story about a tiny man shrunk with some girls who gets "close" to him in a variaty of ways. Unless I've been looking in the wrong places, there's been a severe lack of those kinds of stories lately.

That being said, what the heck is up with chapter 8. I'm not buying that kiana would act that way to a bug. Kiana would have to be either drunk, or some kind of insectophile for that chapter to make sense. Also, he can survive an oven but not acids? That doesn't make too much sense either. Though I guess we saw no evidence the acids could have harmed him, pherhaps it was just paranoia on his part, he'ld probably have been fine.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you overall liked the story. That means a lot! That being said, I understand where you're coming from. I could come up with an explanation for each of your complaints, such as the fact that Kiana is really just an incredibly playful girl. Above all though, every giantess story requires a bit of suspense of disbelief on the part of the reader. Simple as that!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2016 6:01 PM Title: Afterword

Anyone sang the "words words words" to Rihanna's work, work, work? I did.

Ok, this story was great. I actually liked the ending and how Julia kept her word.

Ok, now for the sequel. 4 girls, 3 guys. Or will there be more women?

Since this is at a high school, could there be a sexy, slightly horny teacher? Perhaps some detention, after school help, private tutoring? Office hours?

Samantha seems just like Kiana. Kiana is already oblivious to everything. I hope we see something new in Samantha.

I hope Kiana will still be the sexy one of the group. She was great this story.

I think we need someone like Julia to put these shrunken guys in places where they get in some sexy situations. Ex. Kiana.

Maybe a school nurse. She can "help" these boys. These guys may ask her for help, but instead, they get some fun.

Perhaps a hot mom or milf. There were a few mentions of Kiana's mom and Julia's mom but no action with them. Maybe they want some hot young guys at their disposal.

You can add a girls locker room, cheerleaders the squad, or practice in sports. School gym? Aerobics, yoga class? "Ok, class. Take the tiny man and gently slide him up and down your cleavage. Yes, that's it. Keep it up girls".

What if someone else finds the shrink gun?

I'm suggesting a lot of people becuase since it's a school, I expect lots of contact with new people.

A girl uses a little guy to help her chest on a test.

Girls gets caught cheating on test, teacher takes the man and disciplines him. :)

Use more materials, rope, tape, rubber bands, floss. (Girls can tie up a boy)

Dip a guy in some sauce or drink and suck on him like a lollipop.

I will come up with more later. Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm really happy that you liked my story. I also really appreciate your suggestions. As stated, I will take every situation into consideration. I look forward to more ideas! Thanks again.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 - The Fateful Morning

Wow! Finally.

Now that's a lot of work just to get their attention.

Now we got 2 possibilities: either she tried to save him, or torture him. (To be honest, I prefer the second option.)

If she saves him, she has to get Julia to unshrink him and I think Erica is nice enough to do that. However, let's not forget that Zack lost his voice. It should be interesting to see how they communicate.

Now what I hope to see is some torture. Imagine Erica looking at Zack in disgust and believes everything that Julia said so Erica believes that Zack was the true villian. Not to mention that Zack can't argue back since he lost his voice. I hope Erica just decides to sneak up on Kiana and drop him inside Kiana's underwear. Hehe.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Again, you continue to give out some truly amazing ideas! The next chapter is the finale, so I hope it lives up to your expectations! I'm expecting you to be rather surprised...

Reviewer: Woobles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 6:45 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident

Really loving the story! My favorite parts are easily the butt/fart stuff, hoping to see more of that in this story and future stories! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're liking the story. More of what you like will certainly come in future stories. I hope you look forward to it!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 12- A Restless Night's Sleep

Yep, he should have stayed with Kiana. That way he can at least enjoy being stuck there.

Zack should just give up trying to restore himself and just try to take advantage of this new situation.

I really like how Kiana keeps mistaking Zack for other things. What if Zack dresses up as a doll to blend in, but Kiana just sees a sex doll. Now that would be fun to see.

For now, we got to wait to see what happens to Zack next. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I have to say that Kiana is definitely my favorite girl out of the three. She's especially fun to write chapters about! As for your idea, that's a really good suggestion. I'll have to keep that in mind...

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 12- A Restless Night's Sleep

I love the parts when he is flattened and gets sticked to their bodies like a tattoo. My favourite scenes with any doubt. Very good chapter! Also, I think it's amazing that you can write a whole chapter per day. And not a small one but a big one. Congratulations for that too!

Reviewer: TheSmitty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Pleasure is all Hers

Thanks for reviving this story. I love the unaware/mistake for bug moments with Kiana!

Keep up the good work - TheSmitty



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking this story! Yeah, there's something really appealing about those "almost recognized but not quite" or "mistaken identity" scenarios. And anything that's unaware is great in my book. Thanks again!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Pleasure is all Hers

Yes! Almost exactly like my suggestion. I was hopping he gets stuck to her panties at the end throughout the night, haha.

Such a steamy chapter, and I loved it. Kiana is so good at being sexy in unaware scenes that if I was Zack, I would just stay with Kiana. I would even just stay stuck to her panties, haha.

What a great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: You know, I probably would have just stayed with Kiana too. Zack does want to continue living a normal life though, so he must press on! As for Kiana, it's really fun to write chapters about her. I love her!

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 3:39 AM Title: Prologue - The Incident

Glad to see you are back. I can't wait to read more of this great story. Keep it up!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Reviews like yours are what inspire me to keep on writing!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Stomach Ache

Honestly, I hope Kiana used Zack like she did last time in the tub. That scene was great.

Perhaps, she gets turned on during the movie and decides to have some fun with Zack.

Well, since you finished the story, I can't suggest alternatives, but anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Some of your ideas aren't too far from the truth actually...heh heh. But yeah, I would have loved to include review ideas in this story, but I also didn't want this story to keep falling apart, never being finished. It was a hard choice to make. I'm pretty happy with how the story turned out though. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2016 4:17 PM Title: Intermission - Apology

Apology accepted.

I simply forgot about this story so it's not like I was waiting for the rest of this story. I just moved on.

Well, now that's it back, I had to reread the whole story to see what was it about since its been a while.

Glad you are back.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me!

Reviewer: anton1991 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2015 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack

Great story! when will you post your next chapter?

Reviewer: Machinistmage Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 12 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack

Definately one of my favorite stories that I've read so far. It has a good scattering of situations that I enjoy, plus a fun vengence driven character, and I'm always a fan of unaware vore. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 08 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 9 - A Spoonful of Zack

Interesting idea to have Julia assign the vore task to the unwitting Erica and Kiana. Plenty of graphic description of the eating of Erica's Zack snack.

I'm allergic to milk, or you'd have 5 stars LOL. But seriously, great stuff.

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