[Report This]Date: May 04 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 22. Priorities
Finally got caught up.
This chapter was fantastic. I like how Kelly isn't choosing sides between Lisa and Casey(original I thought she'd choose Casey to stay big) because she doesn't agree with either one. I honestly think Kelly is gonna kill herself or at least try to in an attempt to grow into a bigger giantess. I just hope if that's the case she won't get too big because what would be the point for her if she can't interact with regular sized people, maybe something like 500' because then people would be like an inch and the other two would barely reach her navel.
At any rate I'm glad that Sykes jackass is finally gonna get his. Looking forward to seeing Kelly crush him.
Gonna play devil's advocate now. If I'm right about Kelly wanting to get even bigger to control the others she'll have to give Casey something(like maybe the first town they grew in). Just saying because Casey likely will never stop especially if she feels like her giantess status is going to be taken away. Lisa is different, I think that dead down she wants to protect people and if Kelly were to somehow get in possession of them I believe she'd back off to save them and do what Kelly wanted(which is to leave her in peace).
aaron
PS I'd still like to see Casey get her fingers on Kevin( I believe her boyfriend's name was).
Author's Response:
I'm glad you caught up. I was missing your feedback :)
After a few slower chapters, this one (and also the previous one) are much faster paced. I'm happy that you liked it. It's one of the important chapters in the story. Volume 2 is almost at its ending and the level of action will increase even more in next week's chapter.
As usual, I won't comment on specifics of what will happen in coming chapters, but you have some good ideas ;)
Having Kelly choose Casey's side and the two of them behaving like cliché giantesses would have been a little too easy. Instead, I decided to push the differences between the three girls to the limit and to change the scenario a little bit (more to come about this next week). To me, it was logical that Kelly would end up keeping a more balanced approach to the whole situation than Casey and Lisa (if one can call balanced a position that consists on wanting to stay big and use the size to do whatever she wants and rule over everyone else...).
Finally, regarding some of your suggestions... well, I already started working on ideas for Volume 3 :). I don't know if it will ever become a reality, but after quite some time without a clear idea on which direction the story could take, I seem to have found some inspiration. Hopefully it will be enough to complete it (otherwise, it won't be published). But I did not want to stretch the story in Volume 2 any more than necessary.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: May 03 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 22. Priorities
Ok so now we see if Kelley can get bigger. The you can't stay like this line with Kelley saying Ron is right is making it so hard to wait for next week. Is kelly gonna be able to get bigger (oh god I hope so haha)? Will she be able to put Lisa and casey in their place? What can the humans do if she gets bigger? They really can't even stop the girls at this size! As always can't wait for next update!
Author's Response:
Well, you won't need to wait much. In next Saturday's updates all of your questions will be resolved :)
I won't tell much more before then... (other than what the ending of Chapter 22 already suggested).
I hope that what's coming won't disappoint you!
Cheers!
Date: May 02 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 22. Priorities
Really happy for the update! I'm a bit surprised that Kelly didn't at least break Ron's arm or something to scare him into not doing anything else. I wasn't too surprised she didn't kill him but I was thinking she was gonna be alot angrier than she was!
It looks like Kelly is the wild card here; we already know that Casey is gonna be a crazy bitch that kills everything in sight, and we know that Lisa is gonna try to stop this. But I'm still wondering what Kelly's role is in all this! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Well, Kelly was angry at Ron, but she was satisfied enough with hsi explanations. In the end, it became clear that both of them had lied to the other but it was also clear to Kelly that Ron had not tried to kill her and that it had been someone else instead. In that context, she could not kill him. After all, she appreciates him. Kelly has got to a point where she doesn't mind killing those who attack her but where she is still mindful about everyone else. It's an unstable enough position to be at, but as you say, she is not a crazy bitch like Casey. She is not like Lisa either...
I think the next chapter will finally clarify everything, even if some things will end happening as a consequence of a series of of coincidences. Volume 2 is getting to the end...
As always, thanks for the feedback. I know that not everything in the story happened as you would have preferred, but I'm glad that you are still enjoying it. Cheers!