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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 18. Intentions

So it's kind of looking like Kelly is Casey's bitch right now. Now I'm not saying that Kelly wouldn't be screwing with tinies but I don't think she'd be outright killing them if she wasn't scared that Casey would beat her ass otherwise...

And, of course Casey would learn to fight in prison, so Kelly IS at a disadvantage here. I wonder if even Lisa is even going to be able to fight her, I think I rememeber that Lisa knew some form of martial art in the first story, but when she became a wife and mother who knows if she kept up with it?

Things are getting more interesting ever chapter! I can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Well, I understand it can look like Kelly is Casey's bitch, but it's not exactly like this. Right now Kelly is very puzzled and trying to figure out the new situation she has found herself in. She knows Casey very well and she is trying to understand the consequences of her presence before she acts or makes any decision. And with Kelly's character, this means that she will play along while she is making her mind up. The situation is quite different, but her reaction is not that different from the one Kelly had in Volume 1, when Casey was gradually getting more violent and Lisa overreacted to it. 

Kelly has always been a reflexive person and she won't give her game away until she knows exactly what she will do. Of course, the fact that Casey is violent and skilled at fighting and that Kelly knows that she would probably lose if she fought her is influencing. 

As for Lisa... yes, she was a brown belt in jiu-jitsu in Volume 1, but as you are mentioning, she got married and has just had a baby. In the meantime, Casey has had plenty of experience at fighting in a maximum security jail where she was surrounded by scum. Lisa has definitely lost the advantage she had when she subdued Casey at the end of the first story... but you will need to wait a little to find out how much ;P

Thanks for the encouraging feedback. There is still quite a bit of story left, but the plot is already advancing towards its ending. There are a couple of surprises left. I hope that you will enjoy what's missing.

Cheers!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 18. Intentions

Great episode. Shows how Kelly really feels power over the people but also feels she doesn't need to needlessly kill like Casey. It was interesting to see her getting into the "game". I wonder what caseys game will be. Still wondering how they think Lisa can stop these girls. Missed the update last week but definitely delivered this week. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Kelly really enjoyes her power, but she is not cruel like Casey is. At the moment, Kelly is a little bit puzzled by the situation, but once she gets into using her power to have fun, she lets herself go a little. Casey's attitude will be quite different, as you probably already imagined. As for Lisa: she doesn't know what she will do to stop Kelly and Casey; she just knows she needs to do it, since it's what her conscience tells her to do.

I could not post the update last week. I was travelling and swamped with work. I'm glad that you enjoyed the one this week. Hopefully it compensated :)

Cheers!

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