[Report This]Date: March 07 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 16. Defiance
Wow, so it hasnt even been a day since Kelly became a giantess and shes already killing lots of people! And shes associating with Casey? Kelly has crossed that line now...she has blood on her hands: basically shes irredeemable at this point, if she ever returns to normal size shes going to prison or getting the death penalty along with Casey for sure now!
And i have a feeling shes only gonna sink deeper into evil. Right now she was even trying to justify snuffing out people lives but later she'll probably start to think her "goddess" status alone will give her the right to choose who lives and who dies...With Casey as her influence, i see it happening almost for sure...
Great story though, Im stoked to see where you take things from here...Is Lisa gonna be a killer next? Will Kelly regret her actions later? Oooh, i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes, the truth is that Kelly had not imagined that she would have to do what she has done in this chapter, but... I guess that being hit with a Hellfire missile doesn't do too much to improve anyone's mood. At the beginning of this chapter Kelly is mad for many reasons. On one hand she is mad at having been attacked. The fact that she has actually been hurt is much worse. Over the last few chapters Kelly had become too arrogant and overconfident and having been reminded that she can still feel pain has not been very welcome. And she is also genuinely pissed off at the death of Daphne. She liked her and enjoyed having her around.
The decisive moment has been when she has stood up and the military has shot more missiles at her. Then, she has understood that it was her or them, and pissed off as she was, she has crossed the line. Of course, that means that she will get in trouble if she ever returns to normal size, but in her mind, Kelly does not even consider being small again. And, with the military having shot missiles at her, she has not too many doubts on what their intentions are if she does not fight back.
This doesn't mean that she will necessarily sink into deeper evil. The fact that she has avoided stepping on the few civilians that lay in her path to the military proves that she can still tell the difference between those who are trying to hurt her and those who are helpless. Will she be able to tell this difference for long? Well, the coming chapters are going to take you out of doubts :). Just let me tell you something: Kelly is not like Casey.
And don't worry about Lisa: no matter how pissed off she may get at some of the things that have been done to her, she is incapable of killing on purpose.
Thanks for the feedback. I hope that you will enjoy the coming chapters.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: March 07 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 16. Defiance
This chapter needed to happen lol. How could these girla just run around freely. Now even Kelly is getting more aggressive. Her and casey team up to take on military? I don't see the military winning. Of course last resort is independance day nuking maybe? What about Lisa? This is like a great weekly TV show. At the end you already can't wait for next week. I can't give story enough props. Love it
Author's Response:
Yes, it needed to happen. Sooner or later Kelly and Casey had to face some sort of resistance. The fact that they had both showed up by surprise had given them some time of roaming around uncontested, but it was to be expected that the little people would eventually fight back in an organized way.
Of course, things will change from now on. They need to change. Casey's attitude will pretty much be the same, but Kelly had not expected what happened. Still, the fact that she has teamed up with Casey is purely tactical. You'll see how things evolve in the coming chapters. The military will have some tough choices to make...
As for Lisa... she will be back soon.
Thank you very much for your feedback. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. I'm happy that you think so high about it. There's still plenty of Side Effects left, but things are starting to line up towards the conclusion. I hope that your opinion of the story will remain the same once it's finished.
Cheers!