[Report This]Date: January 30 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 10. Escalation
The entire train scene from when she first discovered it to when she finally places Melinda down on the same rooftop as the train has thus far been my favorite from this story. How absolutely frightened Melinda was when she initially saw those window sized eyes(great description by the way) staring right at her then heard a voice that reverberated off the glass in the train car.. I could go on and on. That scene was done perfectly.
I really like her attitude in regards to knowing she has to display her power and show the tiny police who's the boss while maintaining her playful yet gentle disposition. I for one cannot wait to see how the cops react to their weapons having no effect on her.
I hope this isn't the last we've heard of Melinda, because I greatly enjoyed her demeanor. Her character was becoming more likeable as she was starting to except Kelly as this enormous giantess(liked how Melinda was offended by Kelly's taller joke and I honestly think Kelly was hoping she would've had some form of rebuttal).
aaron
PS I was rereading some of this story and the part where Ron says Lisa won't grow until she's done breastfeeding; I'm going to assume she won't be growing unless something like what happened to the others causes her to grow. Now since she's been breastfeeding or still is breastfeeding should that have anything to do with her possible growth? I'm thinking yes.
Anyways, spectacular chapter and I'll definitely be tuning in this weekend(hopefully it's out by then)
Author's Response:
As always, thanks!
With the feedback you've been giving so far, saying that the train scene is your favorite one yet is a lot. It was one of my favorite scenes to write, too, so I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
One of the main changes versus Volume 1 is that I tried to incorporate as many third person viewpoints as possible to try to improve the description of the scenes. The current chapters with Kelly are the ones where I could use this resource the most and it was a lot of fun to write them. I'm glad that you like them too.
As for what will happen... as usual, I'm not going to provide any teasers. I also got some comments on Melinda in the Giantess City forum, where this story is also posted. I did not expect that she would become such an interesting character. I'm afraid that, as Darlene before and as other characters that will show up during the rest of the story, the main role of Melinda in Volume 2 is to provide an additional viewpoint to the scene. In any case, I'm still thinking on what Volume 3 will be, and some of the ideas I have are around going back to some of the secondary characters in previous stories. Honestly, I still don't know if this will end up being just a crazy idea or if it can work (or even if there will be a Volume 3), but reactions from reviewers like you are always a source of inspiration.
Next chapter will develop the theory behind the women's growth (including Lisa's lack of growth) a little more. You'll get more details when I post it, but a possibility no one seems to have considered yeet is that Ron may be wrong in his analysis. After all, it would not be the first time, would it?
Please, keep the feedback coming. It's great to be able to understand, which such a detail, what people think of what I wrote.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: January 26 2015 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 10. Escalation
Hoo-boy, I can see that Kelly really has let this power go to her head...I wonder? Will she feel guilt if someone dies because of her actions? So far, it's been all fun and teasing, nobody seems to have been killed by her yet.
It's obvious she's not afraid of shaking up or even hurting humans but killing them outright? Will her little display of power and authority cost police officers their lives who are only doing their jobs, leaving families without fathers and mothers to coming home? Theres no going back from that...
I hope she doesn't go that far. Great chapter though, I'm liking this story quite a bit!
Author's Response:
Kelly definitely enjoys her size, and the power it grants her. The power has definitely gone to her head.
Kelly's way of enjoying her power is through playing with the world around her and finding out just how much she can accomplish. She deosn't care too much if people gets upset or even hurt, but she is not a sadist that enjoys hurting others just for the pleasure of it (as Casey...).
Her main concern, as she heads for the police task force, is how to establish her position of authority without having to resort to mindless violence. But, of course, the actions of the little people around her will also influence the way she reacts...
I'm afraid that I need to stop here if I don't want to get into spoilers ;)
Anyway, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Hope that you will like the rest just as much. There's still quite a bit of it left.
Cheers!