[Report This]Date: January 22 2015 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 9. Unfolding
Excellent chapter.
Like how they're tracking Casey like Godzilla, to be fair she pretty much is. I can also see what you meant by not showing too much Casey. Was I reading it right that not only has she leveled the prison but also some random gas station and a small town? Most likely without being provoked but just because she could. Her character fits very well in this story with Lisa being her nemesis. And then there's Kelly who seems to be having the time of her life.
Why wasn't Ron truthful with Lisa about how Casey and Kelly grew? I mean sure telling her that by killing them or at least attempting to has brought on their titanic size. But at this point what does he have to lose? Lisa has been taken against her will, her husband and child are being kept from her so Ron better start being more forthcoming with her because if she finds out on her own what happened she'll be even more upset.
Now I know Casey isn't thinking about this but what if she realizes that the only way for Lisa to grow was to kill her. Meaning will she try and prevent that from happening?
I also enjoyed the footage part where Ron sees Kelly and Casey for the first time. Would like to see a reaction from Kevin watching the news and seeing Casey as an even bigger giantess.
aaron
PS I especially liked how Kelly commanded that tiny guy to suck her nipple with a single word. But quickly realized he was way too tiny for that.
Again, I'm really enjoying the amount of detail you've put into this story, it really brings these characters to life. I hate to ask this but when do you think your next chapter will be?
Author's Response:
Thanks once more for the detailed and very encouraging feedback!
Casey is definitely a psycho-bitch, which coupled with her size means that she has the destruction potential of a natural disaster. You are right that she has leveled not only Blackrock but, essentially, everything she has found on her path, like the gas station and the small town. And you are liked in guessing that she was not provoked. In Volume 1, Casey was a bitch was she was still somehow under some moral standards. She is beyond that now. She has spent too much time surrounded by scum and has had too much time to think about how good life when she was big and how miserable it became later. So, now that she is big again (and actually, quite bigger), Casey will enjoy her size without inhibitions, and in her mind, this includes plenty of death and destruction. It's not that she will no longer avoid it, but she will actually seek it as a way of reinforcing her new status.
Kelly, on the other hand, loves being giant and will do anything it takes to stay her size, but to her, being a giant is a way to have the ultimate power and the ultimate experience. And, while she is not especially careful with some of the consequences of her actions, she does not enjoy causing pain just for the sake of it.
As for Ron and Lisa... well, right now people at the FSD are completely freaked out. With Kelly and Casey giant again, they have miserably failed in their most basic objectives and need to handle a national security issue that they know will be blamed on her. While Ron does not want to be mean to Lisa, he does not have too much freedom of action, and he cannot just explain some things to her. Of course, this doesn't mean that what he is doing is right, and Lisa has all the reasons to be incredibly pissed off with him.
Hope you will continue enjoying the story.
Cheers!
PS: Next chapter should be up Saturday or Sunday. This week is a little busy, but I should be able to find some time over the weekend.