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Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

Really good story as always :) I love the detail of the vore and how willing the girl was to let it happen.

P.s sorry to hear about everything that is going on recently, hope it all gets better for you.

- Frankstergirl

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very nice, I really enjoyed the chapter. Susan is a realy fun character to read about, so i realy dig these alternate tales. Its good to see you back again. Sorry to hear about your computer, the same thing happened to me a few months back. It sucks to lose stuff that you've been working on, so I understand not wanting to resume right away. Again, great job, and I look forward to chapter 11.

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