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Reviewer: reznam rj Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 5:46 PM Title: Welcome to the Family

i have a feeling michelle will be just fine during the infinity clock, part of the fairy tail anime michelle got her head bashed that see can look all the way behind her and she was able to put her head back to the way it was and just kept on fighting. what i would do to get a girl like that ;). and as for the challenge i have no frigging clue im not a anime fan i watch mostly fairy tail, and pokemon. but id rate this 7/10 for effort.



Author's Response:

I know right lol Michelle is special :)

I appreciate your review Reznam, and i'd like to know why you decided on 7/10 if possible. I'm not disappointed at all i'd just love to hear your views on it :)

Reviewer: SenatorWarlockLord Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 3:23 PM Title: Welcome to the Family

Hellooooo! (^_^)

Not very good at guessing as I have either gotten it either a: Exactly Correct by Scene; or b: Look like a imbecile trying to understand. So no guessing will be heard from me. I approve the Chapter completly for your first time back in a while. Really good. On the point of Angry Reviews because of Ending... Huh? If someone gets angry at you over it, I would simply ask "Where is the problem?" because I do not see one.

Also, NOTICE ME SEMPAI! <(T___T)> => (-____-)

I also have a feeling on the planning of Michelle but silent I shall be about it.

Keep doing the good work.

P.S.: If you are looking for ratings, I have a strict policy of only giving them out when asked for.



Author's Response:

It makes me happy to hear your views on my chapter after so long and i can't thank you enough for taking the time to review, it really makes my day :) So far i've gotten no angry reviews so i'm in a good state of mind for the upcoming chapter xD

And as for the ratings i don't really ask for them. I kind of feel like thats a hand out. I like my stories to earn there rating from my fans, and so far all of them have been 5/5, so im doing something right :)

P.S. I notice you ^(*,*)^

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2015 1:29 AM Title: Welcome to the Family

Wow, now that was a heck of a chapter. You hit all the right points, emotional scenes, steamy sex scenes, plenty of laughs, and even a short action scene at the end. It was definitely worth the wait. I didn't remember a lot about Michelle after you brought her in last chapter, so I went back and watched the episodes she was in. It seems like you got the character down pretty well. As for the previous challenge, you definitely got me. It never occurred to me to look at WoW. After going back and looking up the monster and castle, it was pretty spot on. I'll try to redeem myself this time though. Here are my guesses:

Ms. New Year's Eve/Ms. Doublefinger/Paula - One Piece

Jan Valentine - Hellsing

Adalbert Von Grantz - Kyou Kara Maoh



Author's Response:

OH COME ON! REALLY?!

Adalbert was supposed to be the tough one and you get it in one shot >.>

I fail at charactor guesses ;-;

 

"Sigh" Alright a deals a deal, i'll start working on next chapter today and try to post it sonner then before.

I'm glad you liked the chapter Shall, your reviews are one of the reasons i love to write ^.^

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