Reviews For Omega: Homecoming
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Reviewer: mrcool Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2014 4:11 PM Title: Tidings

I'm loving this story, i dont know about anyone else but i'm hoping Lauren's family is evil and abusive, it's much more appealing that way to me.  Very much hope there is some f/f parts and some foot parts to go along!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. There is definitely some pretty intense conflict on its way.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 12:40 AM Title: Tidings

I'm afraid that Laurens' family is going to break laws, and end up in confinement. I've already grown to love the beta, omega relationship, and I can't say I can very well stomache beta voilence as much anymore. The family already seem to be mostly prejudiced, hatefilled, voilent, people who are willing to "do anything" to stop a beta from being apart of the family. I don't have much hope for Ian & laurens relationship lasting to much longer, and I am getting this feeling lauren will do something on accident, and that the omega involvement will be too late; I have a sinking feeling I'm being to optomistic for your writing style.



Author's Response:

Well, don't lose all hope just yet! It is Christmastime, after all. ;)

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2014 12:17 AM Title: Tidings

At first, I was like, Oh cool, another happy Omega story thst I will spent looking for new chapters to read like a page addict. But then, I was like, Oh wait, this is a Jacksmith Omega story. This will not be a happy story. :( It's like thinking you found a new cocaine dealer, but found out its actually a new heroin dealer who takes less time to release new chapters.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I'll try to throw in a little cocaine with the heroin.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 7:01 PM Title: Tidings

Interesting concept, looking forward to the read.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 4:51 PM Title: Tidings

Golly, starting off with the holiday suffering right away, huh? How interesting. The F/f tag is very intriguing. 

 

It'd be a real breath of fresh air if Ian turned out to be a rational and assertive man filled with righteous wit, willing to put his miniscule foot down for the woman he loves, rather than the usual (excuse my terminology) beta tinies turn out to be.

I'm getting my hopes up too high, aren't I? Let the suffering begin I suppose, I hope my heart can take it.



Author's Response:

Not that I want to spoil, but that F/f may or may not be intended for the eventual appearance of an Omega.

I promise Ian is a far better person than the central Beta of my previous story in this series. Hopefully you enjoy what's to come.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 2:18 PM Title: Tidings

I'm really liking this. I'm a sucker for holiday themed stories. Looking forward to seeing more of these characters.

aaron
PS will you add more tags or will this be a foot free tale(say it isn't so).

Author's Response:

Thanks man. I'm afraid it is so: the foot action won't be as present as in my other stories, but that's not to say a few feet won't be stomping by the end.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 12:40 PM Title: Tidings

Excellent start. This can only not end well. 



Author's Response:

Probably a very fair prediction...

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 12:32 PM Title: Tidings

interresting start. I hope that this story will be updated again soon  before 2015!



Author's Response:

This story will be updated throughout this season, so there will definitely be more before 2015.

Reviewer: TinyLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 9:35 AM Title: Tidings

Great start!!

 

Does thi mean you won't update today Watch Over or Time-Out 6: Power Play?? :( :(



Author's Response:

Thanks! That's correct, but there will be more of those stories posted soon.

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