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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2014 4:01 AM Title: Be

I bet it'will be the 'emotional card'. the omega threath card is too easy to guess



Author's Response:

Not a bad guess...

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 6:06 AM Title: Be

If she strikes Ian down, he'll become more powerful than they could ever imagine!

If I was him, I'd refuse to give up not because of direct defiance, but because I could tear apart the family with my death. I'd threaten to ruin them from beyond the grave. Mwahahahahahah!

Author's Response:

Ian definitely won't be giving up just yet. And as we'll see next chapter, he does have one card left to play against Britney.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 9:05 PM Title: Be

So pretty much the entire family sans Millie and Lauren might end up with Claire or Bridget or one of our other larger enforcer type friends.



Author's Response:

We'll just have to see! It'll depend on who has charges pressed against them by the end. It couldn't be Bridget, though, since this is chronologically post-Inheritance.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 4:56 PM Title: Be

Did not see any of that coming... Can't say I approve but I will most definitely be tuning in to see what happens next. I'm hooked on this story now.

aaron

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it; I hope what's next keeps you interested.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 4:51 PM Title: Be

My heart is absolutely racing, and you paused it so abruptly! I have to agree with NightEye here, Lauren can simply threaten to report all of this, can't she? Her mom's already broken the little guy's arm, she can file that for aggresion to Aegis. Then again, I don't think Britney's in the right state of mind to heed such warnings. 

Gotta hand it to you for making Ian stand up for himself. He's got a calm disposition for this kind of situation, and I like that, knowing that kicking and screaming won't get you anywhere.

I've forgotten to ask, how long do you think this one'll go? Planning for a happy ending on Christmas? Also, I've been happily awaiting the conclusion to Watch Over, is its ending coming up next?

Finally, I'm curious as to how you can consistently update and juggle three stories at once. Do you plan far far ahead, or do the stories simply write themselves?

Nice job at always.



Author's Response:

Lauren does have that option, and may be using it very soon; Britney is indeed not thinking clearly enough to consider that.

Ian's probably had a tough enough life that he's learned the only way to keep from losing himself is to stay true to his feelings.

There are 3 chapters left of this. I'll be posting the end to Watch Over very soon.

I plan fairly far ahead and then write chapters of whatever I'm in the mood for in quick bursts. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 3:38 PM Title: Be

Heartpulsing chapter. 

Ian has alpha sized balls to stand up for himself and his relationship like that. If Britney does anything to him I hope the Omega that takes care of her will be Jenna. 




Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. And I'm sure Jenna would be all over this situation if she found out about it.

Reviewer: NightEye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2014 12:26 PM Title: Be

Britney isn't very smart. If Omegas are the rulers of the world, injuring - or worse - killing a Beta on purpose is what will destroy any hope of a career or college education for her. Her mother even said so in chapter 2 : "the people making those decisions are pretty liberal".

Best she could do is get the hell out of there before she does anything to Ian. 

But that wouldn't do well for the plot. ;)



Author's Response:

You're right that there's not a great way out of this for Britney. We may soon see that she has other motivations besides job security, though.  ;)

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 10:16 AM Title: Intervention

.....So maybe it's less the "Ha ha" kind of laughing and more the "We're struggling every minute not to kill this web designing little shit for our daughter and sister." kind of laughing.



Author's Response:

The comedy is definitely in short supply here.  ;)

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 8:02 AM Title: Intervention

I like to imagine that black people don't exist in the "Omega" series. Because that implies that white people have to be so racist about SOMETHING, that even smaller white people living within the same cultural spheres will do. And that's hilarious to me. :)



Author's Response:

That's certainly an understandable thing to imagine; many of these characters definitely have a penchant for placing themselves in a distinct hierarchy. There actually are black people in this world, though.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 7:14 PM Title: Intervention

This might be your finest work outside of the full on fetish stuff.



Author's Response:

Damn, high praise. Thanks man.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 7:04 PM Title: Intervention

After Inheritance I thought everything was over. The site lost some of its char as I didnt really waited for anything with as much expectance as I did with it, but I feeled in peace. Just having a good time. But then, checking the most recent, I saw something. I saw your name alongside a new omega story, and then everything changed. I was naive, I thought I could take it. That I was fully ready for this. But I started reading, getting lost in your wonderful prose, in the marvelous emotions you are able to cast with a simple touch, with a story that holds such magic to brought tears and anguish to me.

Now im trapped again. Slave of my passions and uncontrollable desires,I now scroll every single day waiting for an update, holding my breath, getting ready for the worst, rooting for the characters, hating, loving, hoping for them, having one more reason to hate all the britneys in the world. So much. I just hope I can handle this before you destroy me.



Author's Response:

Hehe. Glad I could ensnare you into more emotional trauma. I hope you manage to stick with it!

Reviewer: NightEye Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 11:56 AM Title: Intervention

Oh God ! Oh God ! Oh God ! Oh God !

Please don't let her kill him ! Okay, just a bit injured to have Omegas come into this, but not too much.

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease ! 

So cruel !



Author's Response:

I've just gone mad with power, that's all.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 11:03 AM Title: Intervention

Good chap! But it is called intervention and i didn't see it! Lol



Author's Response:

Well, maybe "attempted intervention" is more accurate.

Reviewer: Russellp Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 9:06 AM Title: Grip

Good history. 

Please, make the family pay for the actions.. and let the couple stay togheter. ;)

Sorry my bad english ;)

Continue the good work.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 8:26 PM Title: Tidings

They'll all be laughing about this next year. :) 



Author's Response:

Hehe. Optimistic, aren't we?

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 7:13 AM Title: Grip

Tis the season to be jolly, right?!



Author's Response:

Fa la la la la, la la la la.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 1:30 AM Title: Tidings

It's starting to get me. I'll admit that this story doesn't have that instant attention grab that your last Omega story did for me, but it's starting to get interesting...

Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

That's fair. This story definitely has more of a slow-burn quality than Inheritance. I hope you enjoy what's to come.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 4:31 PM Title: Grip

I'm glad somebody decided to bring this aspect of the universe out, I know it was kind of touched on when the husband/son got dropped off at the center(my apologies for forgetting character names) but this is the first time it's seemingly broken up family.



Author's Response:

That was definitely part of what made me want to write this: the chance to show a mixed family that isn't quite as accepting and loving as the Lindons. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: desslok Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 12:47 PM Title: Tidings

Wow - this is actually kind of painful to read. Replace "Tiny" with "Gay" and this exact same conversation could unfold all over the world. Lines like "No, I'm the normal one" are probably all too true.



Author's Response:

That's definitely a thought I had when writing. Not that the story is supposed to be taking a social stance, but I knew the scenario wasn't that far removed from real life.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 12:06 PM Title: Tidings

I agree with Cloud, this looks bad for Ian & Lauren! Only hope is 'liberal' Millie making stand   



Author's Response:

;)  Things are definitely going to depend on some of the family having a change of heart.

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