Reviews For Omega: Homecoming
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Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chase

Well, that's an unnecessarily dark ending.



Author's Response:

Well, it's not over just yet!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chase

Really liked how that turned out. Was not expecting Britney to have a beta friend and possibly lesbian lover. If she lives and Ian as well, this will shake that household(especially the mother) to it's very core. I'm starting to enjoy Britney's character now. I hope the mom(forgot her name) has some kind of epiphany where she suddenly likes betas( unlikely yes but plausible).
Great writing as usual.

aaron
PS when will Judy be back from her errands?(I hate to say it but she's the reason I like that series as much as I do)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing; glad you liked the stuff with Britney. Her mother may not be quite as big a fan, though.

Judy will reappear in a couple chapters. The climax of the story will heavily involve her as well.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 11:45 AM Title: Chase

Huzzah we have an emotional breakthrough...then bam impending doom.

 

Are you TinyDann in disquise? ;)



Author's Response:

I guess it is a little different than my normal MO of just skipping straight to impending doom, isn't it?

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