Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 6:01 AM Title: The Drop Off

Well, I have to say that this was a real 'eye opener'.  Without knowing all that much about Kelly & Kevins background, I assumed that they were already deeply involved with one another,...  and Jake, (although, she deeply cared for him) couldn't stand in the way of what they already had.

Kelly does have her doubts about Kevin though, (suddenly, becoming so attentive to her) but, she seemed to want to 'keep him around', and therefore, projecting that 'he' was her chosen one?

.... after this 'Drop off', though, it's pretty clear that Kelly has just 'royally' screwed-up!

Very emotional chapter.  I had tears in my eyes at the end,... I knew that Kevin was going to screw everything up!  Ha!

.... and, I have a real 'bad' feeling, about this 'Kendra?'

I'm glued to my seat!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  Great work Sonic!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I certainly set out to write a story that would eventually not be as "black and white" as it may have appeared.

With such an odd set of unrealistic circumstances, you'd imagine a big challenge would be to write people's reactions to these things as if they could really occur. That's at the core of my writing and I'm always intrigued about how the relationships/friendships and other factors are effected by my fantastical, fictional scenarios. That said, expect some crazy things in the chapters to come. Or don't expect it... that would be even more crazy, wouldn't it?