Date: July 29 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 22: Lil' Jess
Oh dear, Jessica looks like she'll die soon without the magic that made her gigantic. Looks like she is better off huge than normal.
That was quicker than I expected. We'll have to see what happens with the smaller and weaker Jessica.
Date: July 23 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 21: Shocking Tree
I guess you're gonna have to find some way to put Jess in danger. Honestly I think Jess is abit too overpowered to the point where it drains the story of a sense of danger. The last time I truly felt the duo in danger was back when Jess was under Nostory's spell...
She's not as powerful as her Home counterpart, but maybe she can get herself into trouble later on.
Date: July 15 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Goddess and the Lumberjack
Gwen is practically a spoiled 10 year old in an adult womans body and with unlimited power. Shes used to getting what she wants, plays with humans like they're toys and trashes them without a second thought once she breaks them. Honestly tucker is in trouble, and i cant see anyone being strong enough to help him! I do wonder what other power she has, can she read minds, or bring people back to life?
We'll have to wait and see if she can do anything else. Despite what happened Gwen did show the tiniest glimmer of guilt (but only a tiny).
Date: July 08 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 19: Decisions
Great chapter! I was surprised by how reasonable and not a dick Lord Logan was, sure he may have had his reasons but i still liked him. Most characters in this story who arent Jessica or Tucker turn out to be assholes Ive noticed so Logan was a pleasant surprise...
Yeah because not everyone in the world is an ass so it had to be reflected in the story. Just like the fact that not everyone in the world is a saint.
Date: June 10 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
Gwen has some sexy needs and unfortunately for our heroes, wants Tucker although she does see Jessica as an obstacle. Hope it doesn't lead to anything...
We'll have to see what happens there. There might be something that happens between Jessica and Gwen but what will happen? I don't know yet.
Date: June 03 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 15: Mistress Of Size
Gwen seems incredibly childlike, she's lived probably thousands of years doing whatever she wants without consequences so of course she turns out like this! Unfortunately she's even more powerful than Jessica so there isn't much they can do about her...
Yep she's infinitely more powerful than Jessica and doesn't have the same morals.
Date: January 26 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
I doubt Jessica would kill out of anger, she's too good for that. However that didn't make her any less terrifying than she was when dealing with the object of her anger.
For Tucker, if there are invisible men coming to warn me of some great danger I'll be be on my guard, possibly even considering turning back.
Even a gentle giantess is very scary when she's extremely angry.
He could have been invisible or he could have simply been in Tucker's mind. He was very drunk at the time.
Date: January 26 2015 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 13: Escape
Dang, we got an angry Jess on our hands! Im surprised she didnt pop Nostory like a grape in her fury!
I think that she would have liked to but I think her conscience stopped her from doing it. BTW the story is on hiatus now since I'm working on a BFG prequel story.
Date: January 18 2015 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
Well love is the strongest magical force in the world. If done right it does not come across as cliched but moving.
It seems I must make a quick exit, stage left.
There is nowhere to run from an angry 120 foot giantess. Good luck my friend/