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Reviewer: YesStory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 70: The Final Stretch

"Yes with hopefully several tons of gold along with us."

Eventually they came to another wall but unlike before they could clearly see a switch on the wall right next to it. On the wall was written the words 'Riches Of The Ages, Enter If You Must.' This was a clear indication that this was the treasure chamber and just the sheer sight of it gave Sir Tucker a second wind. He quickly walked towards it and he looked at it for a few moments.

The writing itself seemed to be written in gold and this was just another indication that the treasure was inside. Without any hesitation he pressed the switch on the wall, at first nothing seemed to happen but slowly they began to hear a grinding noise. His excitement grew as the grinding became louder.

Eventually the door itself began to rise and both Sir Tucker and Jessica waited to see the treasure on the other side.


And now there is no treasure inside. ;3




Author's Response:

Who knows? You maybe right but you also could be wrong. We'll have to see.

Reviewer: Sir Purple Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 70: The Final Stretch

All I can say is you really know the art of cliffhangering 

Author's Response:

Always leave the reader wanting.

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