Date: December 11 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 34: First Hurdle
I actually waited all the week to go home for the weekend from the service to red this. Great work. It is hard to find stories that actually features an adventure and gaintess together And that is why I live this one.
Also the mystery man from the inn/contest makes this story so much better, I love mystery
Glad that you're still enjoying the story. I thought that having such a mystery man might make things a little more interesting.
Date: December 09 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 34: First Hurdle
I'm not sure if it's the new GTSWorld layout or what, but it's getting hard to read these chapters, they are too bunched together with no spaces between paragraphs. Anyway, this was a decent chapter, I'm not sure why, but this arc isn't too interesting to me, it just hasn't really grabbed me yet. Maybe the lack of GTS content? I don't know. I keep up with the story though, I've read enough to be invested so far.
Author's Response: Sorry to hear that you're not enjoying this arc like the others but give it time and there will be GTS. Also the other thing is the site's new format