Date: October 28 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 28: Doing It For Love
Now that I ponder about things in this story I'm reminded of that cloaked figure that appeared to Tucker in the bar near the beginning of the story. The figure gave him a warning if I remember and then vanished. Could that guy be a god or demigod? Not expecting an answer on this just wanted to throw my thoughts out there.
That is a thought and I'm glad that you're taking this much thought into the story.
Date: October 28 2015 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 28: Doing It For Love
Yep, hate Gwen, this chapter just cemented it. And I hate her good deal too, probably one of my most hated characters on this site, but that was your intention so good job on that! I really hope she somehow gets beat down a peg or two! She seems like the type that would be a sore loser and probably a crybaby too if it happened considering she's basically a spoiled brat who is used to getting whatever she wants.
But it would have to be another demigod or god for that to happen, I don't see how in a million years any human would be able to. And you've made it clear that not even Jessica would be a match for her! As for Tucker, I gotta give credit where it's due, he can be pretty manipulative when he needs to be huh? I underestimated him!
Yeah a human no matter how empowered wouldn't stand a chance against Gwen, maybe she might get what's coming to her.