Date: November 16 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
Looks like this theme of Tucker needing to prove himself may surface again, Tucker could end up doing something foolish just to show Jessica what a brilliant knight he is.
Author's Response:
Yeah that is the general idea. He doesn't like to think that he is dependent on Jessica to get him out of a bad situation.
Date: November 08 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
Lake Town? Any dragons around? Filling the air with Smaug? I kid but I hope Jessica can fend them off, kick their asses and knock theirs egoes down a notch or two!
Author's Response:
Hopefully she can, dragons can be very troublesome and they can come in all shapes and sizes from the size of a cat to those that dwarf even her.
[Report This]Date: November 03 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
I am also a fan of naming swords. I am working on a story where the main character names the sword... actually that is a spoiler.
I do question as to why villagers would dislike Jessica so much. I mean, she is a pretty big economic boost to have around.
Author's Response:
They view her as a freak who is able to destroy their homes and livelihood with minimum effort.
Date: October 30 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
This definitely feels better than BFG, I like it and hope it'll be sustained throughout the entire story. Jessica's backstory felt both engaging and made her feel likable at the same, good start there.
Author's Response:
I hope it is as good as the original series and this Jessica will be a little different. I hope that you enjoy the rest.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
So far, I do like the premise of a medieval story, which so far, has proven to be leagues and bounds ahead of any other story set in medieval times. I won't nitpick as to how the hell a peasent has FIFTY gold coins, when the average salary at that time for a blacksmith was two silver coins everh two daysdepending on fief, or anything else like that due to the magical naturs of the story. Once I got past the first four paragraphs , i became hooked.
I do hope you can keep this up at a good pace. This is certainly a story I can finally look forward to, as there are very few I am reading nowadays.
Author's Response:
The pace should be the same as it was in the main series, I hope that you enjoy what you read and for the fifty gold coins, maybe Tucker had saved them over a number of months.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
I'm definitely liking the direction you got going here. I hope it's just as lengthy as the main story. Any plans to bring in new characters who aren't in the original BFG? Just curious.
Author's Response:
It could be as long as the main series and I have plans for many characters who will be original to this story. Thanks for reading.
Date: October 29 2014 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning
Great intro chapter! So far so good, I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes from here!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you enjoy what is to come my friend.