[Report This]Date: January 26 2023 7:42 PM Title: Playing with Food
Great, short, erotic story. The only thing I would've added is at the end, either a thought or a comment to the effect of her picking up her next boyfriend. A girl like this always looks forward to the next.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2018 1:49 AM Title: Playing with Food
Omg!!! I just read this story again after all this time... and would still think belonging to this goddess would be wonderfully grape! :)uh
[Report This]Date: January 26 2015 4:20 AM Title: Playing with Food
Awesome story <3 I like transformation plots mostly even better than shrinking, if they are planed and written out well, especially tiny food related tf like a cherry, peanut or a single m&m. I wrote you a message on here, dont know if it got through :) Hope to hear back if possible, would love to share and speak about your awesome stories! Ive not read them all so far, but they look so fantastic already. Please keep up the amazing work, youre really unique and special. Especially the two Candy stories were awesome. I would love reading some unaware micro anal insertion plots, I have a few in mind Ive always wished to read about but never found a quallified author for that. Please have a nice day!! :)
[Report This]Date: November 17 2014 12:46 AM Title: Playing with Food
This is the greatest thing I've ever read.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2014 3:45 PM Title: Playing with Food
Loved that story! :)
No sour grapes for me! haha :)
[Report This]Date: October 17 2014 3:22 PM Title: Playing with Food
this was fantastic. My novels are full of vore, but I never came up with this idea! It was very refreshing. Wow! I'd love to be the handsome guy in the grape, I think, although I usually don't think of becoming quite that small. This story has awakened something new for me.
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Date: October 09 2014 2:44 PM Title: Playing with Food
I really liked it. I am a full-blown voraphile, and like it. First short story that i have, so far. The others are very long and drawn out.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2014 11:22 AM Title: Playing with Food
Though I certainly find my tastes to that of Riczar as he stated in his review, I do understand and have accepted the element of death in these fantasies when reading other peoples work. This was really well written for a short peice to be so immensely hot ^_^
Date: October 09 2014 3:02 AM Title: Playing with Food
The thing that hampers my enjoyment of these kind of stories is the demise of the dude that's swallowed. They seem like a nice and loving couple that she would kill him seems horrendous to me. I could enjoy the story if she had a way to retrieve him later on. I'd give high ratings to this story if that were the case, but I'm going to refrain from rating, since a "pure" vore story is outside my genre preference.