Date: October 04 2014 2:55 PM Title: How it started.
I realize there is now a generation that learned to write via text messaging, but real cogent writing requires paragraphs. A series of disconnected sentences can not make a convincing scene and it doesn't flow.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the response.
Date: October 03 2014 11:25 AM Title: How it started.
I really like the idea of this story. I just wish your characters wern't so old. I love the fact that he expects his gf! Wonderful story, only complaint is the older men but that's a personal prefrence.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the positive feedback. I am not a Profi writer, just doing it as a hobby. Hugs Form me...
Date: October 03 2014 3:56 AM Title: How it started.
Am writing now a new chapter. Will try and post it anew every day! Thanks for the comment. Keep 'em comming!!! Don't forget the rating, please! I liked your doll-house story too! Very erotic, with enough fun for the whole family !! Keep up the good work.
Curtis
Date: October 02 2014 3:30 PM Title: How it started.
Looking forward to seeing where it goes
Author's Response:
Thank you. Am working on it. I liked your doll house story too. I certainly am not able to write like that. Thank you very mich. Curtis