Reviewer: Seth Lase Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying this series so far. The only real problem I have with this story is that I notice you sometimes get the names of characters mixed up. I kind of wish there was less hard vore and more soft vore, but that's just a minor thing and does not ruin the story at all.

I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to the next part of it.

Reviewer: SirDFrank Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

This is my first review on this story, so it'll be a long one.
First of all, I've read Life is funny that way when you were still writing it chapter by chapter and, of course, the sequel.
I have to say I really appreciate two things in particular about your writing style.
The first one is the plot: on this site there are many stories that I like, yours being one of them, but not all of them feature a solid plot.
In LIFTW2 your characters often have a background history and there are treacheries and schemes (something I always like).
The other thing I find really amazing is how your dialogues are structured.
For example when I was reading the argument between Tory and Frankie, when she had found him chatting with Christina,
I could picture their exspressions and motions in my mind as clearly as if I was watching a film and not reading a story.
And the dialogue itself has a depth that lets the reader understand the emotions of the characters.

That being said, when you left us with that cliffhanger 'bout Tory being swallowed by
Frankie I was like "Wtf? Why? Is she pretending to have swallowed him?
Maybe she has tagged along with Christina?" Than I convinced myself that she was just faking.
But that was a good cliffhanger indeed.
Last thing: I personally think that Victoria's masterplan is to start some sort of war between
regulars and giantess because she'll be able to gain something out of it. The real question is:
what's she really trying to achieve? Power? Blackmail the governments?
I guess that we need to wait and read through your schemes :)
P.S. I agree with you 'bout almost everything you wrote in your bio.
  

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wait, what? Why did Frankie just eat her friend that she cared so much about before? This came as a complete curveball.

Author's Response:

Lol i know. All will be revealed next chapter. Prepare for the worst....and hope for the best. Sometimes the reason may be in plain sight.

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter as always. lookimg forward to seeing where the next part goes :)

Reviewer: greggy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2016 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'd also like to see some tasha and crystal action

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 12 Part 3

Yay! I'm excited for the return. The first story was really good. And this one is even better. Every chapter is so good.

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was getting worried there for a while. It's good to see this story being continued

Author's Response:

I had to take a very long break. I honestly had every intention on finishing this, but alot of stuff kept coming up and then writer's block. We all know how bad writer's block can be. 

Reviewer: JohnBena Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 12 Part 2

Make another chapter pls

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 12 Part 2

please can you update more frequently!! I want to read more aaron chapters!! but please dont let this story go unfinished!!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

So far/so good. But, my right leg is beginning to snore, it's been asleep so long! Ergo; I have to (reluctantly) call it quits, here, for today.